Love Eternal

When today ends
And tomorrow comes,
That's when I'll let you go.

When tonight drifts
And the day begins,
Thats when I'll move on.

When my brain stops thinking
And my pride starts feeling,
That's when I'll forget you.

When my heart stops
And my breath leaves,
That's when I'll stop loving you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Guazon Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 3:41 AM
Thank you all so much! I've been so busy I wasn't able to post -or write (not in that particular order). Thank you again! :)
Merryman Avatar
March 31, 2013 at 4:11 PM
Congrats on your win, Grushen! Love, Kim
Taylor Avatar
March 31, 2013 at 11:15 AM
Congrats, Grushen. Well done. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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March 30, 2013 at 10:56 PM
Grushen, congratulations with your awesome love poem.... rendering the best part of life~ always*LINDA
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