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Love Eternal

When today ends And tomorrow comes, That's when I'll let you go. When tonight drifts And the day begins, Thats when I'll move on. When my brain stops thinking And my pride starts feeling, That's when I'll forget you. When my heart stops And my breath leaves, That's when I'll stop loving you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/15/2013 3:41:00 AM
Thank you all so much! I've been so busy I wasn't able to post -or write (not in that particular order). Thank you again! :)
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Date: 3/31/2013 4:11:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Grushen! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/31/2013 11:15:00 AM
Congrats, Grushen. Well done. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 3/30/2013 10:56:00 PM
Grushen, congratulations with your awesome love poem.... rendering the best part of life~ always*LINDA
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