Love Effect

My life is quiet, my life is gray.
Till you came, and I can only say,
''Don't come, if you will go.''
''It will just hurt me, hope you know.''

Your life is busy, your life is happy.
Till we met, and all you can  say,
''I come, but I will go.''
''If that's will hurt you, I'm sorry to know.''

My life was so easy, now my life is so crazy.
Till you went away, and all I can say,
''Don't come back, I'm still hurt.''
''Your presence will just remind me, I am not worth.''

Your life is easy, your life is still gay.
Till we parted, and all you can say,
''I'll not come back, I'll just hurt you.''
''My presence will just remind you, going away is all I can do.''
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A. Sharma Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 10:24 PM
Loved those effects Mckhy! Be positive in life always,, congrats on big win !
Lindley Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 9:04 AM
Congrats on your win!!!
Khan Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 7:03 AM
Great win..Congrats :)
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July 16, 2014 at 5:57 PM
Mckhy, Congratulations! Thank you for enjoying my contest, stop by my latest blog "Tanka you, but no tanka you :)" If you'd like, or have time! No Matter, enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Taniegra Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 5:31 AM
XD
Mallari Avatar
June 28, 2014 at 5:35 AM
hahaha
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