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Love Effect

My life is quiet, my life is gray. Till you came, and I can only say, ''Don't come, if you will go.'' ''It will just hurt me, hope you know.'' Your life is busy, your life is happy. Till we met, and all you can say, ''I come, but I will go.'' ''If that's will hurt you, I'm sorry to know.'' My life was so easy, now my life is so crazy. Till you went away, and all I can say, ''Don't come back, I'm still hurt.'' ''Your presence will just remind me, I am not worth.'' Your life is easy, your life is still gay. Till we parted, and all you can say, ''I'll not come back, I'll just hurt you.'' ''My presence will just remind you, going away is all I can do.''

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Date: 7/17/2014 10:24:00 PM
Loved those effects Mckhy! Be positive in life always,, congrats on big win !
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Date: 7/17/2014 9:04:00 AM
Congrats on your win!!!
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Date: 7/17/2014 7:03:00 AM
Great win..Congrats :)
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Date: 7/16/2014 5:57:00 PM
Mckhy, Congratulations! Thank you for enjoying my contest, stop by my latest blog "Tanka you, but no tanka you :)" If you'd like, or have time! No Matter, enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/28/2014 5:31:00 AM
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Date: 6/28/2014 5:35:00 AM
hahaha

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