Krish Radhakrishna Poet Haiku

Love Education

heaps and heaps of toys
makes a wealthy child happy
love misunderstood

mother's love embrace
brings happiness to hungry child
love well understood


Written 16/10/2021
Lune contest
William Kekaula sponsored

syllables 5,75 first haiku
words 3,5,3 second haiku. 
checked on PS

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Malabika Ray Choudhury October 20, 2021 at 6:58 AM Brilliant Haiku! And a wonderful message expressed in few lines. Warm wishes ~ Mala Krish Radhakrishna October 20, 2021 at 11:43 AM Thanks Mala! My kind regards! Krish

Paulette Calasibetta October 18, 2021 at 7:11 AM Krish, Your lovely haiku paints a picture of 1,000 words….. Good Luck in the contest! Blessings, Paulettes Krish Radhakrishna October 18, 2021 at 7:51 AM Thanks Paulette! Appreciate your supportive words!:)

Gershon Wolf October 17, 2021 at 7:34 PM A deep truth, too oft-ignored in our age of instant gratification. Spot-on, Krish! ~ Gershon Krish Radhakrishna October 17, 2021 at 11:54 PM Thank you Gershon!! Nice to hear from you!! Hope you are keeping well!

Karen Jones October 17, 2021 at 12:44 PM So true. Well done. Krish Radhakrishna October 17, 2021 at 1:05 PM Thanks Karen!