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heaps and heaps of toys makes a wealthy child happy love misunderstood mother's love embrace brings happiness to hungry child love well understood
Written 16/10/2021 Lune contest William Kekaula sponsored syllables 5,75 first haiku words 3,5,3 second haiku. checked on PS

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Date: 10/20/2021 6:58:00 AM
Brilliant Haiku! And a wonderful message expressed in few lines. Warm wishes ~ Mala
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/20/2021 11:43:00 AM
Thanks Mala! My kind regards! Krish
Date: 10/18/2021 7:11:00 AM
Krish, Your lovely haiku paints a picture of 1,000 words….. Good Luck in the contest! Blessings, Paulettes
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/18/2021 7:51:00 AM
Thanks Paulette! Appreciate your supportive words!:)
Date: 10/17/2021 7:34:00 PM
A deep truth, too oft-ignored in our age of instant gratification. Spot-on, Krish! ~ Gershon
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/17/2021 11:54:00 PM
Thank you Gershon!! Nice to hear from you!! Hope you are keeping well!
Date: 10/17/2021 12:44:00 PM
So true. Well done.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/17/2021 1:05:00 PM
Thanks Karen!

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