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Love Does Not Die

Life - a mere whisper in eternity Bitter taste tonight of melancholy Dew on rose petals leaving me thirsty For nostalgic notes of music folly And tender dreams under Christmas holly When feelings run as deep - love does not die ‘Tis no more than a momentary goodbye As love for you flutters in afterlife On beautiful wings of a butterfly In the mystical garden of your life AP: 3rd place 2022 Submitted on May 16, 2018 for contest DEATH: LOVE DOES NOT DIE sponsored by BROKEN WINGS - RANKED 6TH

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Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 5/20/2018 4:50:00 AM

Congratulations, Line on your win with a great poem. "When feelings run as deep - love does not die".. great line, so touching.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/20/2018 7:29:00 AM

Thanks, Subimal. Most appreciated.

Constance La France

Date: 5/19/2018 10:51:00 PM

Line, congratulations on your win in my contest with this brilliant write, well done ~

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/20/2018 7:29:00 AM

Thank you so much, BW. Great contest.

Susan Gentry

Date: 5/19/2018 12:10:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem about death and love. Well done. :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2018 3:27:00 PM

Thank you , Susan. Much appreciated.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 5/19/2018 10:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2018 3:27:00 PM

Thank you Besma. Much appreciated.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 5/19/2018 10:46:00 AM

A wonderful portray of Love! Unique imagery and impressive expression! A joy reading your poem of love. Stay blessed Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2018 3:28:00 PM

Thank you so much, Besma, for your lovely visit and comment.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 5/18/2018 3:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Line! You took the road less traveled with the "Love Does Not Die" theme and came up with a dandy!:-)

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2018 3:28:00 PM

Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Edward.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/18/2018 2:46:00 PM

Many congrats on your win Line - I especially loved that first line it is so so beautiful:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2018 3:29:00 PM

Thanks so much, Jan, for your lovely visit and comment.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/18/2018 1:47:00 PM

Congratulations for your win Line :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2018 3:29:00 PM

Thanks, Heidi. Much appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/18/2018 12:42:00 PM

- Congratulations Line, on your 6th place in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2018 3:29:00 PM

Thanks, Sunshine. Much appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/17/2018 7:21:00 AM

This poem needs no other words to complement or complete it.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/17/2018 8:03:00 AM

Thanks, Caren, for your lovely visit and comment.

Frederic Parker

Date: 5/16/2018 6:29:00 PM

A nice way to see life dear poet...good luck in the contest

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/16/2018 6:36:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Frederic.

Virginia Waters

Date: 5/16/2018 4:56:00 PM

beautiful truth - love always - V

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/16/2018 5:01:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Virginia.

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 5/16/2018 3:41:00 PM

Very beautiful write, Line. Should do very well in the contest.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/16/2018 4:59:00 PM

Thanks, Rhoda. Much appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/16/2018 2:23:00 PM

- The only thing that is certain is that life is unpredictable ... and love is strong, Line - Lovely written for the contest, good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/16/2018 5:02:00 PM

Thanks, Sunshine, for your much appreciated visit and comment.