Get Your Premium Membership

LOVE DOES NOT DIE

Life - a mere whisper in eternity Bitter taste tonight of melancholy Dew on rose petals leaving me thirsty For nostalgic notes of music folly And tender dreams under Christmas holly When feelings run as deep - love does not die ‘Tis no more than a momentary goodbye As love for you flutters in afterlife On beautiful wings of a butterfly In the mystical garden of your life Submitted on May 16, 2018, for contest DEATH: LOVE DOES NOT DIE sponsored by BROKEN WINGS - RANKED 6TH

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/26/2018 11:11:00 AM
One of the main reasons I would truly like to believe in an "afterlife" is if there we could be reunited with those we loved in this one. I love the first line in the first stanza, Line.
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 5/26/2018 11:32:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Jim.
Date: 5/20/2018 4:50:00 AM
Congratulations, Line on your win with a great poem. "When feelings run as deep - love does not die".. great line, so touching.
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 5/20/2018 7:29:00 AM
Thanks, Subimal. Most appreciated.
Date: 5/19/2018 10:51:00 PM
Line, congratulations on your win in my contest with this brilliant write, well done ~
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 5/20/2018 7:29:00 AM
Thank you so much, BW. Great contest.
Date: 5/19/2018 12:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem about death and love. Well done. :)
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2018 3:27:00 PM
Thank you , Susan. Much appreciated.
Date: 5/19/2018 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Line.
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2018 3:27:00 PM
Thank you Besma. Much appreciated.
Date: 5/19/2018 10:46:00 AM
A wonderful portray of Love! Unique imagery and impressive expression! A joy reading your poem of love. Stay blessed Line.
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2018 3:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Besma, for your lovely visit and comment.
Date: 5/18/2018 3:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Line! You took the road less traveled with the "Love Does Not Die" theme and came up with a dandy!:-)
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2018 3:28:00 PM
Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Edward.
Date: 5/18/2018 2:46:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Line - I especially loved that first line it is so so beautiful:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2018 3:29:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jan, for your lovely visit and comment.
Date: 5/18/2018 1:47:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Line :)
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2018 3:29:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi. Much appreciated.
Date: 5/18/2018 12:42:00 PM
- Congratulations Line, on your 6th place in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 5/19/2018 3:29:00 PM
Thanks, Sunshine. Much appreciated.
Date: 5/17/2018 7:21:00 AM
This poem needs no other words to complement or complete it.
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 5/17/2018 8:03:00 AM
Thanks, Caren, for your lovely visit and comment.
Date: 5/16/2018 6:29:00 PM
A nice way to see life dear poet...good luck in the contest
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 5/16/2018 6:36:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Frederic.
Date: 5/16/2018 4:56:00 PM
beautiful truth - love always - V
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 5/16/2018 5:01:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Virginia.
Date: 5/16/2018 3:41:00 PM
Very beautiful write, Line. Should do very well in the contest.
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 5/16/2018 4:59:00 PM
Thanks, Rhoda. Much appreciated.
Date: 5/16/2018 2:23:00 PM
- The only thing that is certain is that life is unpredictable ... and love is strong, Line - Lovely written for the contest, good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 5/16/2018 5:02:00 PM
Thanks, Sunshine, for your much appreciated visit and comment.