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Love Deceives

Behind the mountain, beyond the azure sky unexplored passions, I've watched them die unshed tears, clouds cross a dried fountain beyond the azure sky, behind the mountain. Waiting for a someone, youth and vigour lost a fire of crimson rose, kissed by chilling frost petals now withered, damage had been done youth and vigour lost, waiting for a someone A bunch of dead leaves, sculling in breeze winter's sun, shadows murmuring in trees hollow words echo, knowing love deceives sculling in breeze, a bunch of dead leaves. 16th June 2020 Featured in the best new poem list Sponsor Joseph May Contest Name Swap The Verse

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Date: 6/29/2020 2:58:00 PM
This is awesome, so beautifully written. Well deserved placement.
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Date: 6/29/2020 4:39:00 AM
Debjani, your quatrains have potrayed sadness and separation very well through lovely imagery. Congrats. Mohan
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Date: 6/28/2020 7:13:00 PM
An emotional verse on the misgivings of love. Wonderful write Debjani, Congrats on your win
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Date: 6/28/2020 3:09:00 PM
This muse of yours reflects such honest images of emotions and nature in a love that's lost. Love the way you have used nature's elements to portray phases. Congratulations on your win! :) Blessigns and love :)
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Date: 6/16/2020 9:40:00 AM
Oh my Debjani, this is incredibly beautiful! I predict this will be a First place winner. I am in awe of your talent my friend. I am putting this straight into my Faves! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/16/2020 12:07:00 PM
Oh my dear Connie, such kind words of compliments..I am honoured and excited beyond words

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