Love Debris

Open those hazel eyes so you may see,
You are becoming something you wish not to be.
Open your mind so you are able to agree,
My dream of the future was never a guarantee.
My heart has since shattered into three,
You have taken your game to a vast degree.
I am sure you realize, my love must flee,
You alone possess the unbreakable key.
Our love has smoldered into debris.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2010 at 8:49 PM
excellent title for what you vividly portray here, Congratulations (sorry so late) Andrea
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February 15, 2010 at 1:49 PM
Congratulations Melissa, on your success in John Heck's contest: Love - It Heals & It Hurts with this heartfelt poem. It's easy to see why you placed so high. It is a very strong write. Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 5:14 AM
Melissa, Your moving poem is worthy of being in the winner's circle. Congratulations. Blessings, Connie
Jordan Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 6:28 AM
Melissa congratulations on placing is John's poem - Wonderfully written piece, God Bless, mj
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February 10, 2010 at 1:29 PM
Nice use of rhyme to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on being one of the winner's in John's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen
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February 10, 2010 at 12:45 PM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest Melissa. Love, Carol
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