Love Dance in Haiku’s

one deep note my love  
across space fear dissipates
a sufi guitar ~

~~~~~~~

one hesitation 
crimson seconds of response
fondness embrace waist ~

~~~~~~~~

response meets request 
one withdrawal in tart time
fear was still abreast ~

~~~~~~~

tear trickles down cheek
tactic is but silver fork
melting in fire ~

~~~~~~~~

face of love aware
awakening bountiful 
funny is fire ~

~~~~~~~~~~

questioning quiet
questing luminal lively
unfathomable ~

~~~~~~~~~~~~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Hind Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 11:27 AM
This is very probing. Beautiful work!! So glad to read you again!! I missed you, and the thinking, too!! <3 xxoo
Daniels Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 1:19 PM
ThkU, Paige ! U are kind & thoughtful. B blessed. Xx
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace