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Love Crime

Love, once was beautiful. Until you came, brought me tears and pain and darkened my heart’s light, altered my soul’s purity, and turned the love to lust and sane. I thought you would stay with me. But I was wrong, you left. All that was behind nothing more than what I’d call Mental Crime.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/27/2011 3:21:00 AM
nicely done ..i would be obliged if you would take a look at my work, judgemark and comment please.. thanks
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Date: 6/1/2011 9:25:00 AM
Smile ~ Yesss, the key term I find, in this deepened poe about, Love Crime ~ Wouls be that, Mental Lime.... ~ Love Crime ~ Love, John!:) ~
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