Love Condition

There is a bad love condition
That we all know as suspicion
It tears couples all apart
Because of no love in their heart
Their loving eyes start to turn green
Demeanors go from glad to mean
Attitudes turn on a dime
When someones taking what is mine
No matter what is done or said
Doubt fills up inside their head
Stubbornness starts to take over
They wont listen to each other
Insecurities start to weaken
A love that could never be beaten
By such foolishness and pride
That fills them up deep inside
If they just look back and see
How happy they used to be
It might stop this craziness
And end with a tender kiss
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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December 20, 2013 at 5:40 AM
There's a verse in one of Poe's poems that reads, "That years of love have been forgot in the hatred of a minute". I always try to keep that verse in my head when I fight with my partner or friends or family. Great poem, Sweet Pea <3
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December 18, 2013 at 9:27 AM
Another good one Robin, Keep on writing...Hugs...Roger
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