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Love Condition

There is a bad love condition That we all know as suspicion It tears couples all apart Because of no love in their heart Their loving eyes start to turn green Demeanors go from glad to mean Attitudes turn on a dime When someones taking what is mine No matter what is done or said Doubt fills up inside their head Stubbornness starts to take over They wont listen to each other Insecurities start to weaken A love that could never be beaten By such foolishness and pride That fills them up deep inside If they just look back and see How happy they used to be It might stop this craziness And end with a tender kiss

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Date: 12/20/2013 5:40:00 AM
There's a verse in one of Poe's poems that reads, "That years of love have been forgot in the hatred of a minute". I always try to keep that verse in my head when I fight with my partner or friends or family. Great poem, Sweet Pea <3
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Date: 12/18/2013 9:27:00 AM
Another good one Robin, Keep on writing...Hugs...Roger
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