Lori Lucas Mcclure Poet Free verse

Love Conceded

I have abandoned my quest for love!
For want of love I most ardently repent
With sorrowing heart I concede no longer 
will I allow mine heart to lead!
So helpless a thing mine heart!
How sorrow doth plague me with it’s
ceaseless taunt.
I can find no ease of comfort or solace for 
my soul.
For Loves glory hath grown cold

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Robert Ludden January 13, 2013 at 12:13 AM Never abandon it! Not ever. It is yours. Thank you for visiting my page today. I hope you will look at more.

Toquyen Harrell January 12, 2013 at 1:17 PM Just let Him find love for you. Heartfelt write. Love ya, Toquyen

Kash Poet January 12, 2013 at 11:34 AM Beautiful poem here Lori.Love this.Thanks for visiting my page.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 12, 2013 at 11:24 AM We will thankfully never tired of writing about love ...... I am impressed at how many beautiful words that we can write ..... and share with each other. - Have a lovely weekend Lori and thank you for your poem. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Nita Martin January 10, 2013 at 2:29 PM wonerful write thank you for you coment on mine your friend Nita

David Williams January 10, 2013 at 4:12 AM Lori thy fair maiden do not give up thine quest...David

Vesna Kovrlija January 10, 2013 at 12:19 AM Love`s glory is in your poems.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair January 9, 2013 at 9:14 PM Looks like thinking too much on love these days, love them all:) Jag

Debra Squyres January 9, 2013 at 7:45 PM I think I conceded long ago... love is fickle or is it MEN?? lol Well written piece.

Russell Sivey January 9, 2013 at 6:40 PM This is a truly fabulous write Lori, a glorious write! I really enjoyed reading this elaborate and remarkable poem this evening! What a masterfully written piece, Great Work!!

Debbie Guzzi January 9, 2013 at 6:06 PM ditto...Light & Love