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Love Can Smile

Just breathe with me, its okay our affection can live beyond pain and distance, just breathe with me when you need a good kiss, just breathe with me when there is struggle to be stoked, just bleed with me when nothing else matters, just smile with me when star light touches your face let your heartbeat dance with me across time and space...its okay J.A.B.

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 1/12/2016 4:43:00 AM

A delightful read! -JWE

Justin Bordner
Date: 1/12/2016 4:59:00 PM

Its just good, unselfish love J.W., thank you my friend...J.A.B.

Dalia Shahein

Date: 12/16/2015 12:49:00 PM

Such a beautiful , unique piece of work..it is a master piece poem , so in love with it, great, awesome write as always my lovely amazing poet..

Justin Bordner
Date: 12/17/2015 2:07:00 AM

Thank you so much Dalia...sometimes, when the world is nasty and even love seems capable of breaking us down, a heart needs to truly believe that the one they love is always gonna denfend and inspire, protect and kiss with honest lips my Violet Poetess...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/5/2015 12:51:00 AM

:) This is one of my favorites....sweetness in every line. I see that I've absolutely hogged your comment slots, Justin...but why not? Hugs

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/5/2015 1:15:00 AM

Invade me, smother me, please me more Beloved Poetess...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/27/2015 5:57:00 AM

I have come back to this gem of poem, because it is just so sweet and gentle. Sometimes we need only know someone has our back when life tugs on our bleeding hearts.. "just bleed with me when nothing else matters" An extremely powerful line.. the affection is strengthening, Justin. Love you and your sensational heart! Always, Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 4/27/2015 8:50:00 PM

Your love and friendship are warm cheeks against my weary ears Laura...to be reliable in love, to share the stars and the struggles...your comment is so sincere in it's understanding of my wishes Laura...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/21/2014 1:40:00 PM

it's Ok, Justin. ??

Justin Bordner
Date: 12/21/2014 8:32:00 PM

I'm okay as long as your passion and poetry are in the world Eileen...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/21/2014 1:41:00 PM

Those were supposed to be smiley faces...

Meg Anderson

Date: 12/20/2014 10:07:00 PM

Justin, such beauty in your words! You paint a beautiful picture! Great write! Meg

Justin Bordner
Date: 12/21/2014 8:36:00 PM

The beauty is in the heart shared Megan, thank you for appreciating this soul burst! J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/22/2014 10:21:00 PM

Just breathe with me, it's okay. What a soothing and comforting line....I can imagine a woman safe in the embrace of her man...her head on his chest...holding on for dear life while he caresses her hair...his lips kissing her forehead as he whispers these words...willing her to believe he is her rock and her surety. A strong man...can be a tender man. Absolutely beautiful. Love rereading some of your writes, Justin. You have a poem to fit each mood.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/29/2014 7:00:00 PM

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/25/2014 12:48:00 PM

To protect your woman's heart is a purpose supreme in passion, it has priority even above lust...to share the strife of life is the to be a reliable heart...the vision and companionship you invoke in me produces emotions of such tender loyalty Eileen. Your comment embraces my soul...J.A.B.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/25/2014 10:24:00 PM

aha, here is one rather recent that I somehow overlooked. GOODIE!! I like this. Especially the part about the star light!!

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/27/2014 1:37:00 AM

You are a star kisser, a number nymph, a touch of magic Andrea...J.A.B.

Jay Loveless

Date: 9/10/2014 5:15:00 PM

Simply beautiful. Comforting.

Jay Loveless
Date: 9/12/2014 10:03:00 PM

Thank you for writing such a beautiful piece

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/11/2014 2:45:00 AM

Yes Jay, genuine beauty in holding hearts together. Thank you...J.A.B.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 9/7/2014 4:39:00 AM

lovely sweet write :)

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/7/2014 1:06:00 PM

Sometimes love can survive on a breath Olive, thank you...J.A.B.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 9/3/2014 11:15:00 PM

Beautiful Justin and super-awesome write I have enjoyed. Verlena

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/7/2014 3:17:00 AM

Devotion with no death, love for the sake of our strength. Thank you Verlena! J.A.B.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/3/2014 9:01:00 PM

Justin, you sure have a way with the poets around here. It's hard to mark a real smile. However, I found myself smiling today. I have forgotten how it is to be strong, however, I surely have the support of my loved one. I am sure, anyone needing a smile, will enjoy this. This is a nice way in lifting someone's spirit up. LINDA

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/3/2014 11:02:00 PM

You have my support Linda, my heart's truest tenderness. I I love lifting you to stronger spirit, stoking your richest affection. You have done so for me. My Way is to allow Passion perfection, to grow with the words, hearts and touch of brillaint Artists, and sensitive souls. Real smiles spread real warmth my Sphinx...Justin

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/3/2014 1:29:00 AM

such comforting words that can makes the heart lilt, Justin...will do good at verlena's... huggs

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/3/2014 12:51:00 PM

I love her hum and purr, and instinctively come to hush her pain. Thank you for recognizing the genuine comfort Nette...J.A.B.

Skat A

Date: 9/2/2014 6:50:00 PM

It sure can J.A.B., one baby step at a time. A sweet poem, keeping it real. SKAT

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/2/2014 8:21:00 PM

Yeah, no doubt Skat...we've gotta believe in eachother. I have the smile of her love. J.A.B.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/2/2014 2:09:00 PM

Dear Justin, Your poem has such a calming effect. People need to hear "it's okay" often, whether they be struggling, bleeding, smiling or dancing. I love your poem, especially the last line as it sort of transcends to another world - an eternal bond. If this is for one of the contests, I wish you success. Love, Carolyn

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/2/2014 8:15:00 PM

You clarify the essence of this poem so wisely Carolyn, thank you! To calm her sweetly, to have her know she can rely on my heart. We are making a world all our own, and it's so plentiful.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/2/2014 12:48:00 AM

This is a beautiful poem that could soothe a troubled heart, Justin. Your romantic writes are very heart warming.

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/2/2014 1:26:00 AM

Yeah Eileen, this poem is kinda like a battle cry, a nurturing hug, a romantic kiss, and a promise. This was my way of sharing the hurt, of confirming love. Thank you for your soothing sentiments Eileen...J.A.B.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/2/2014 12:22:00 AM

Love is indeed smiling on you.

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/2/2014 1:19:00 AM

I'm so glad you said that Richard, because that's what I feel between she and I. There are times when love goes from clear arithmetic to crazy algerbra but there is an anchor of passion, suspense and joy in our hearts that keeps us together. You don't plan these things, you just make it work if its real enough and tough enough. I'm smiling along with love tonight. Thanks Richard, for being cool! J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/2/2014 12:17:00 AM

It is nice to see the nurturing and comforting side of you and your poetry, Justin. It is very sweet.."our affection can live beyond pain and distance" That's a very lovely line..beautiful one here...Always,Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/2/2014 1:10:00 AM

Sorry Laura, got a comment at the same time I was replying to another one. Your response to this poem is so compassionate Laura. Just needed to tell my Love that two hearts combined beat more strongly than one. I feel more complete when sharing strength and hope with her. Yeah, Laura we can overcome the obstacles...thanks gor being so sweet. J.A.B.

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/2/2014 12:49:00 AM

True love survives where storms touch and go Verlena. We keep love shine alive, cuz thats what passion must do. Your comment is makin me feel real good with a tear, thanks Verlena...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/2/2014 12:21:00 AM

That last line too...enchanting. : ]

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 9/1/2014 8:50:00 PM

Justin, a friend is always there in time of happiness and when things are not well. I love this poem. You are A okay. A fav... Verlena

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/2/2014 12:53:00 AM

Love survives where storms touch and go Verlena. We make love shine, cuz that's what passion must do. Your comment is makin me feel real good right now with a tear. Thanks Verlena...J.A.B.