Premiere Contest WinnerLove Can Never Be Redeemed

Before the roses withered cancer took her in vain, after the petals w i l t e d her scent never gone- For only one thing in his heart could ever remain, the way she used to sing that special love song, for he had known it had always been her all along. When you fall in love you awake to a new dream, and in loving her he could never go wrong- When your beloved dies, LOVE CAN NEVER BE REDEEMED. When they first met he thought he would go insane, Her eyes so big and brown with amber hair so long- For passion and romance in his heart were engrained, And t o g e t h e r in such harmony they both did belong, For a marriage proposal, he could not prolong. They bore a child and life became quite extreme, before they knew it that little girl already foregone- When your beloved dies, LOVE CAN NEVER BE REDEEMED. At her grave he lingers hoping closure he’ll gain, But his head is telling him to try to be headstrong- For on his broken heart a crimson blood stain, And the d i s t a n c e seems to be forever farlongue. Wishing someone to pierce his heart with a prong. Through all the heartache they made the perfect team, Oh, once more if only he could hear that ol’ love song- When your beloved dies, LOVE CAN NEVER BE REDEEMED. After the petals w i l t e d her scent never gone, he shall never forget his beautiful wife Doreen- For he had known it had always been her all along, when your beloved dies, LOVE CAN NEVER BE REDEEMED. December 14, 2016
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Poteet Avatar
January 4, 2017 at 3:16 PM
a respectable poem and yet so sad. Congratulations, Laura. A bit of French, in farlongue?
Dutta Avatar
January 1, 2017 at 4:25 AM
Congrats Laura to win top position on your deep emotional poem. happy New Year
Haight Avatar
December 31, 2016 at 11:14 AM
Laura, congratulations on your First Place Trophy win for this deep and heartfelt poem. Happy New Year to you! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 8:36 PM
many congrats on your top spot LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx
Callus Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 3:07 PM
Congratulations on placing first with this sad and touching ballade, Laura! ~ Wishing you all the very best for 2017:) Regards // paul
Smith Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 12:29 PM
Congratulations on a terrific win LuLoo...
Green Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 7:35 AM
Congrats on your contest win Laura, not sure how I missed this one, it is sadly beautiful.
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December 29, 2016 at 10:44 PM
Congrats for topping the chart with this fantabulous heartfelt poem. A 7 & a fav.
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December 29, 2016 at 7:57 PM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful sad ballad, Laura.
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December 29, 2016 at 7:37 PM
Very good and very sad, Laura, congratualtions on your 1st place win. Have a Happy New Year’s and all your wishes come true… and don’t forget to eat those Black-eyed peas ? Hugs Eve
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