Love Calls

He is day's melody
adorned in sun-blessed hues

rich and dark  the warmth,
he always finds time

caressing my hours
with whispers of thousand crickets

commands flowers to unfold
for the blooming of our dreams

I am his starlight

his woman

neutral  but luminescent,
all seasons in his eyes.

He leans on me 
for water's sustenance 

bathes away all sorrow,
worships my eyes

with lips of reverence
and wonder ---

in love, he calls my name

at night time, he sings in thanks.


2-13-2014
Feeling The Love Contest of Charlotte Puddifoot
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A  Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 6:19 PM
Hello Ashley, Congratulations, on your win, thank you for sharing, and helping the reader Feel The emotions of Love through your poem. ~SKAT~
Green Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 8:00 PM
Wow, I really felt this. excellent deescription with such a fluid dreamy feel. Congrats on the win
Jerden Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 8:51 AM
Very good contrasting imagery, Ashley! Congratulations!
Mehta Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 4:29 AM
Enjoyed the write on feeling the love and congrats on the fine win, Ashley
Puddifoot Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 5:41 PM
I was so impressed with this poem, it stuck in my mind from the first time I read it; wonderful romantic feeling in these lines; the last line linking nicely with the first; absolutely beautiful, what talent! congrats on your win in my contest :)
Mccoy Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 12:55 PM
Nicely penned with some very great lined :) enjoyed
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