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Love Bursts

His tongue felt glued to his gum with epoxy; his legs swayed, wobbled, softened like spaghetti; for there, at last, she was, waving over her shoulder; her shy smile beckoning him, "Come on over"; jet-black hair falling over a mirthful, teasing eye; ah, arterial bursts of love, what a swell way to die!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/17/2008 2:18:00 AM
Nice, I like "a mirthful, teasing eye". Great job done here. Thank You for sharing. David Bear Caldera
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Romeo Naces
Date: 6/10/2019 3:48:00 AM
Thanks, David.

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