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Love Blossomed 'Neath a Sycamore Tree

Oft' I wonder if that old sycamore tree in the meadow yet stands, Where as youth on languid summer days we sat holding hands; And if our initials within a heart we engraved upon its ancient bole, Have withstood the raging storms or, alas, hath time taken its toll. There in our innocent youth we pledged our love for all eternity, And etched upon our hearts that love and devotion for eviternity. Love transcended the treacherous shoals of life through all these years; Brought us untold joy, and yes, sustained us through our fears and tears. Though our walk is a bit unsteady and our hair is now a silvery gray, We still unabashedly hold each others hands and say "I love you" every day. Lord, how I pray that old sycamore tree in the meadow yet stands, Where our love blossomed on languid summer days as we sat holding hands. Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired

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Date: 4/28/2017 6:03:00 PM
A good descriptive poem that paints emotions with memories of the past reenforced by the reality of the present. You paint a picture with words that bring your memories alive in the reader's mind, and we too can appreciate the charm and ambiance of that old sycamore tree ,as a valued memory of a recent past. Emile. #7
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Date: 4/9/2017 11:26:00 PM
I can't help hoping this is a true story! So romantic!
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Date: 4/2/2017 11:40:00 PM
What a beautiful love story Robert. It is the kind of poem that shows the kind of contentment that only years together can produce. Beautiful! 7 ; )
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Date: 3/30/2017 12:17:00 AM
Deep, mature love shines throughout your lovely poem, Robert! Enjoyed the read. :)
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Date: 3/26/2017 4:29:00 PM
this is a beautiful testament to your marriage, bob! i very much enjoyed it. thanks, too, for a new vocabulary word - just looked up eviternity!
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 3/26/2017 5:36:00 PM
A follow-up on my previous comments. I had a hard time rhyming with eternity but I use a system called RhymeZone when I write to get rhymes, similar words, etc and the word eviternity came up and means the same as eternity. Glad to add to your vocabulary and mine as well!
Date: 3/26/2017 3:57:00 PM
I'm so jealous! Lovely love poem.
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Date: 3/26/2017 2:59:00 PM
Lovely one, Robert!
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