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10.08.2026
Anne-Lise Andresen
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Weekly Poetry Challenge
One-Syllable Words

- Love Birth -


    The earth do not run still
    Moon birth
    The sky ship
    gave us the key
    to the truth

    The skin as dawn
    Wings that guard me
    by vales and hills
    Words of love sing
    -  you let me fly so high
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Kerr Avatar
September 19, 2026 at 10:34 PM
A challenging form, Anne-Lise, and you rose to the challenge. So haunting and reflecttive.🔥❤️❤️ Howard
Anaya Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 10:18 AM
Sighs , proving 1-syllable words can be love magic. Striking image as well. Liking xhugs
Sands Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 9:11 AM
This is beautiful Anne-Lise :)
Rolland Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 4:07 PM
beautifully written, and emotional reading, thanks poet Anne lise
Poet Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 2:03 PM
WOW, marvellous poem with excellent imagery and wording, Anne-Lise.
Winter Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 7:04 AM
Dear Anne-Lise, this is a gorgeous poem ❤️😊 Best, Anne
Daniel Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 6:42 AM
Ethereal😊
Sharma  Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 2:54 AM
Oh how mystical! This is so breathtaking and beautiful, sweet Anne-Lise.. so creative the way you've used all one syllable words! And painted such a magical imagery! I especially love "The sky ship - gave us the key - to the truth" ahhh and the ending! I'm flying high too! This is one such poems that gives the readers wings, to soar freely in the rhythm! Pleasure reading you today, sending moonbeams and soothing starlight 💫💫🧜‍♀️🧜‍♀️✨✨
Empress Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 1:31 AM
This is magical dear Anne Lise, and so very soul warming and poetic, I especially love the picture youv used and also the lines "Words of love sing - you let me fly so high" true love! Makes my heart blush too! Absolutely loved reading you today. Sending you light always ~ 🌙💫
Goldsmith Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 2:15 PM
I enjoyed reading this creative write. Great/pretty picture. "Good Luck" Hugs... Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away...............
Poet Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 1:21 PM
Anne-Lise, you are engaging in some imaginative, creative writing here. Both the picture and the text are appealing to me.
Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 1:00 PM
Creative writing going on here, Anne-Lise. I like both the picture and the words. Way to go. 👏✍️ Sara K.
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