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Love Beyond Earth

Can you believe I seen love at the corner, trembling cold, naked. 
Begging the people for quilt. For warmth .
Kneeling beneath the star lite sky ,eating it self.
With no other food to be eaten. 
Its feet tar black, it seemed to have walked a far distance, 
but still walking towards people begging with persistence. 
Its left arm amputated, but still gives a lady a warm embrace,
 in return for a measly coin.Its eyes held the innocence of a baby.
Its face  bloody, with scares of a trojan warrior. 
Its heart peaking out of its chess,
 blown  by winds of foul hatred , but still enveloped with shards of loving light. 
I first helped him tuck his heart in.
 Then I asked how do you survive in this world of hatred and deadly flying arrows? love replied:i survive on shreds of love ,
for I have endured generations of wholesome  hatred .
A day turned in to weeks,weeks to months. Times of the hour glass had past and
this love in flesh i never seen again.

Until I had a dream I was on a corner,reading a tombstone.
Etched on it was, the hours of love has past,
now in the earth he lays, r.i.p love.

Love has ascended beyond( earth & hour),to dwell in eternity.


Sponsor: Nikko Palmario
Contest: Beyond Earth and Hour Writing Challenge
Hint for saving the earth:throw your garbage in a trash bin,for the( love of earth).
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Arowolo Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 10:22 AM
Awesome piece,Elliott.Nice description and very touchy.Congratulations on your superb win in this contest..
Kendrick Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 3:14 PM
Very descriptive and expressive work..Congrats on your win..Sara
Brown Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 6:58 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Nikko's "Beyond Earth" contest Elliott. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 5:47 AM
Congratulations on your Earth Hour win Elliott xx
Williams Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 3:30 AM
Elliott congrats on your win..David
Allen Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 2:34 AM
Definately different. Making a person of an emotion. Well done.
Sweetheart Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 8:55 AM
wonderful projection of visionary delight elliott.. and a grand entry for Nikko's contest luv.. wishing u much success with this awesome expression of seeing beyond the earthly realm of life..luv..
Kendrick Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 8:15 AM
Interesting work for the contest..Reads like a winner..I am sure that Nikko will enjoy...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Gasun Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 5:22 AM
A nicely written poem. So touching. Thank you very much for sharing and also your comments friend, Elliot.
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