Love Behind Your Fractions

Sore on your cheek
Holding you to smile
That hand's mark on your face yet vanish
Perhaps dwell within your heart

You challenge the love
But it eats you in whole
Your mind plays trick 
But your heart wouldn't lie

Your lips may tell me some scam,
But your eyes look deep into my soul
Don't you dare to deny for this time
That fall for me isn't a crime

The wall of our boundaries has broke into pieces
Don't you dare to hide behind those fractions
Pretend  for something that you're dying not to admit
You challenge your love, but I challenge you to love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 6/13/2013 8:17:00 PM
I love it, did you slap him? Great poem Yanny!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 6/14/2013 10:20:00 AM
Slap who? Lol, of course not, this poem is only a fiction, :p but once in my life I only ever slapped one man and he is my ex boyfriend when I was in grade 9 lol :p what a memory :) wishing you a wonderful day Rick :D hug, yanny
Date: 6/10/2013 6:02:00 PM
WOW ...this has such a deep metaphoric beauty yet describes a hurtful relationship. You write such stunning verses. :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 6/10/2013 7:02:00 PM
Thank you Karen, this poem is inspired by one of the serial movie that I watched, kind of unique but really heartfelt :D wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny
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