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Love Beat

A dream or reality
Your smile is always in my mind
The stars started to blink
Destiny has different paths
Love is a feeling so pure

Reality is sometimes very difficult to 
accept it. I had forgotten your smile. 
There's no trace of it in my mind.

Life demonstrated that journeys 
were separated.
Is better to had loved at least once
in a lifetime that had not loved never. 

Nayda Ivette
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gentry Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 1:15 AM
Congrats! Liked this
Negron Flores Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 6:26 AM
Thank you very much Susan.
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October 2, 2015 at 9:26 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Sara
Negron Flores Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 11:08 AM
Thank you very much Sara.
A  Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 1:03 AM
Nayda, Congratulations on the response to your first poem ***SKAT
Negron Flores Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 11:09 AM
Thank you very much SKAT.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 9:06 AM
Congratulations on your win.
Negron Flores Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 11:02 AM
Than you very much.
A. Sharma Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 2:45 AM
Wonderful poem Nayda n so is the win! Big congrats!
Negron Flores Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 4:47 AM
Thank you very much.
Lindley Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 10:12 PM
CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN NAYDA!!
Negron Flores Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 4:48 AM
Thank you very much.
Tor Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 8:55 PM
Nayda congratulation, Your win is very touching and heartfelt. Love is nice to have when its gone its missed. No one deserves not having someones love...
Negron Flores Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 9:02 PM
Thank you Michael. Your words are very true.
A  Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 9:11 PM
NAYDA, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. **SKAT**
Negron Flores Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 10:38 AM
Thank you very much. It has been a great honor to had my poem featured this week.
A   Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 8:30 PM
Nayda, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Negron Flores Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 10:49 PM
Thank you very much.
A  Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 3:57 PM
Nayda Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Negron Flores Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 7:41 PM
Thank you for your comment and welcome to Poetry Soup. I am not a professional poet, but I am exploring this field.
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