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Love Beach

Hot summer beach weather, everywhere you look, everyone's in groups or couples. Children playing and screaming with joy, no one is excluded from fun and relaxation. A trio works together to dig a deep hole on the shore, father and son do the same further in, but got bored. A group of kids play in the shallow waves by the pier, smaller children are hesitant to their new surroundings. Forecasts say it's nintey degrees today, beach day, all day, waters are cold, time to jump in. I fell asleep on the beach, bad thing to do, so don't get too comfortable, espeacially if there's no one to wake you up. A couple lies in front of me, he's in love, it's so obvious, he finds reasons to touch her. She's tanning, he watches her with compassion, *sigh*, the happiness of Love, the romaticism of Love on the Beach. It's getting late, the couple left hours ago, children are splitting up with new friends to go home. I stay and wait for the magic to begin, the beauty, but the sunset magic is not complete, for i don't have my Romeo by my side yet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/6/2009 7:25:00 AM
And your day is always coming ... if your dream sparkles your eyes like your poem sparkle me. Good write.
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Date: 4/30/2009 7:51:00 AM
Nice.
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Date: 4/29/2009 3:09:00 PM
Oh how much fun this picture you painted I do hope you find your romeo but until then keep watching the sunset and dream to forever! Great write! Laura :)
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