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Love Bah!

All these insipid poems of Love Love Lost…. Love Found…. What is this emotion that makes UP? Down? All this frantic fretting nail biting and bed-wetting. What is this profound poetic notion? What is the source of this commotion?? All these romantic, rabid, ramblings, of Love Love Lost.. Love Found… What is this emotion that makes UP? Down? Palms pale and sweat, brows furrow and frown. All these horrid, hormonal, tizzies, do little more than make one dizzy. Love Lost… Love Found… Abandon this morose emotion right this curse, set in motion. And, if I may, let me suggest, the route Narcissus took was best. Love revealed… Love found. A love who’ll never let you down. A love without product or prodigy To fill the world with more dichotomy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/15/2009 12:06:00 PM
This is just to funny, Love the last few lines.. BG
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Date: 1/14/2009 10:26:00 PM
great write. i really enjoyed reading it. "and, if i may, let me suggest, the rout narcissus took was best" awsomeness- love and peace-james
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Date: 1/14/2009 1:44:00 PM
Oh Deborah you cracked me up with "horrid, hormonal, tizzies and Narcissism being the way to go. So fun to read. Great job, Laurie
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Date: 1/14/2009 1:36:00 PM
lol this is NICE, all of these things do happen when it comes to love" brows furrow and frown" I like it!...Love Maryam
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