Love At First Sight --Cookie Jar

Cookie Jar




If you were close and not so far away
I would bring you a cookie from my 
Cookie Jar
Hoping you would take a bite,
                                                                       Love 





                                                                   at first sight!
( a dedication to ladies)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mitchell Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 7:32 PM
Beautiful even though short!lovely very very lovely indeed!
A   Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 2:16 PM
ha..love the dedication... and it happens to be I'm a cookie lover.. now give me my cookie... :-)...JK.... (soupmail)..*always~ :-) Linda
Magnet Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 5:31 PM
PD, Your wish is my command, lovely lady.xx
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2013 at 4:44 PM
love your reply to my comment I left below.
Magnet Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 5:05 PM
Thanks Andrea, what wouldn't I do to make you enjoy your cookies, must please the lady.
Guzzi Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 6:01 AM
It's been a long time since I have heard [cookie] used in this way. It made me smile. Light & Love
Magnet Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 9:37 AM
Well Debbie there are some rhymes which sticks in the head from school days ,even infancy and this was one which was played out in a game of Tic. Don't know if you played it our way, but I rememeber we used to say, Who stole the cookie from the cookie jar? yes me, no you and then we would call out a number and that person would be chased until caught. Something like that(memory is fading!).
Andresen Avatar
January 25, 2013 at 1:50 PM
So sweet, Robert...... love it ! - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Magnet Avatar
January 25, 2013 at 2:52 PM
Thanks Anne, there is always a cookie for you.
Tsiluma Avatar
January 23, 2013 at 11:25 PM
Lovely dedication Robert! Cookies are always a temptation.
Magnet Avatar
January 25, 2013 at 2:57 PM
my cookiies I hope are irresistible, hope you will take a bite.
Dietrich Avatar
January 23, 2013 at 4:44 PM
yum!! What kind of cookie is it??
Magnet Avatar
January 25, 2013 at 3:00 PM
One with ''eat without caution'' written on it.
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