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Baby mother child son daughter photography

- Love At First Sight -

As the golden threads of silver, a mother protects her child
The path they will follow together, through life they leave deep footprints
The love that is shared will always shine its rays, nothing to fear










   Sijo
  (15-16-15 syllables)
  http://www.howmanysyllables.com
  14.06.2016
- Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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- Published in the newspaper : 20.06.2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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La Rosa Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 3:52 AM
Awesome write congrats :) enjoyed greatly
Andresen Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 12:32 PM
- Thank you very much for congratulations and visit, Linda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hodges Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 1:59 PM
Hey sunshine smile, I love your poem love at first sight and the picture that goes with it. It makes me warm and loving inside. I love babies! When ever I see a baby it truly is love at first sight. Keep writing, your inspirational!
Andresen Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 2:13 PM
- Candace, thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kannan Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 3:32 AM
Beautifully written and well deserved
Andresen Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 7:18 AM
- Thank you Supraja, for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 7:56 AM
now thats unconditional beautiful anne lise congratulations on poem of the day pal passing you a warm smile
Andresen Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 12:58 PM
- Thank you very much for congratulations and visit, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Daniel Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 3:34 AM
Oh! This is superb, simply beautiful, Anne-Lise:) Congrats on POTD:)
Andresen Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 12:58 PM
- Thank you very much for congratulations and visit, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Neels Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 1:59 PM
Anne-Lise, this is a gem :) congratulations on POTD hugs Wilma
Andresen Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 2:02 PM
- Thank you very much, Wilma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bateman Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 3:27 AM
Congratulations Dear One Anne-Lise on the POTD honor!! This is a very radiant and beautiful Sijo verse. Most Excellent!! TR/FAV too!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Andresen Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 8:25 AM
- Thank you very much for congratulations a "FAV" and visit, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 4:45 PM
Sunshine, a big CONGRATULATIONS on receiving POTD with this awesome write, enjoy the honor ~
Andresen Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 8:24 AM
- Thank you very much for congratulations and visit, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Williams Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 4:27 PM
Congrats on such a lovely poem as this.
Andresen Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 8:23 AM
- Thank you very much for congratulations and visit, Marilyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 2:33 PM
A mother and child are bonded before birth and I know this through personal experience, that silver thread remains... what a lovely way to put it Anne-Lise. Congratulations on this beauty being selected for POTD! Most deserving! #7 ; )
Andresen Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 3:28 PM
- Thank you very much for congratulations and visit, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 2:24 PM
Lovely thoughts ... congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 2:27 PM
- Jan, thank you very much for congratulations and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rockwell Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 1:54 PM
Congrats on POTD!
Andresen Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 1:58 PM
- Thank you very much, Cindi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ashe Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 11:02 AM
First, congrats on this POTD! Having spent the last two days with my daughter and granddaughter, your Sijo poem describes this love precisely! A beautiful write Anne-Lise! :-)
Andresen Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 11:41 AM
- Thank you very much for congratulations and visit, Walter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Muideen Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 9:32 AM
Congrats for being featured.........A.M.
Andresen Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 10:50 AM
- Thank you very much, Afolabi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Warrior Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 8:06 AM
Congrats on POTD!!!...god bless...^WW^
Andresen Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 8:08 AM
- W.W., thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Haight Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 8:01 AM
So beautifully said, Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your poem being honored as Poem Of The Day. Hugs, Sandra
Andresen Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 8:05 AM
- Thank you very much for congratulations and visit, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 7:22 AM
Well done Anne-Lise, lovely thoughts. Congratulations for POTD honors...
Andresen Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 7:44 AM
- Kind words have great value and p.o.t.d. are always a pleasure , Charlie :) - It may actually save the day :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 6:57 PM
Ahh!! What a beautiful picture and wonderful work to go along..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Andresen Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 6:01 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Muideen Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 4:49 PM
Yea, that is true. Excellent write, thanks for sharing........A.M.
Andresen Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 6:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Afolabi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 3:26 PM
Aww this is sweet and oh so true!
Andresen Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 3:36 PM
- Thank you Richard, glad you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Chircop Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 2:42 PM
So beautiful this is Anna...Adding it to my faves.
Andresen Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 3:35 PM
- A great pleasure that you will "fav" my poems: - Love At First Sight -, many thanks Charmaine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 12:56 AM
Great and beautiful write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Andresen Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 2:09 PM
- Thank you Ravi, glad you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 5:12 PM
Excellently done on first love of mother and new born baby. A nice 7. A heart touching piece. Loved always my lovely lovely friend, bl
Andresen Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 2:08 PM
- My friend Bl, thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 4:33 PM
No walls more secure than those of a mother's! Excellent dear, Anne-Lise!
Andresen Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 2:07 PM
- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, dear Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
June 14, 2016 at 4:00 PM
Wonderful A-L. Love the rays of love.
Andresen Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 2:07 PM
- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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