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Love At First Sight

A cloud I was given Had nose and brown eyes My baby...Christopher for: Cyndi MacMillan's Contest "Creativity" Modern Haiku

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Date: 8/13/2012 3:27:00 AM
a nice haiku...congrats!!
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Date: 6/11/2012 5:41:00 AM
This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.
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Date: 2/19/2012 10:39:00 AM
A delight to read Iolanda. Seeing ones child for the first time is simply amazing. Have a wonderful Sunday :)
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Date: 12/25/2011 10:54:00 PM
Iolanda, a great haiku, thank you for sharing.. May the magic of writing fill your days here on the soup. May all your dreams come true this holiday season. I hope you are enjoying the blessings that Christmas brings.. filling our hearts with hope and joy, just take care of yourself... once again enjoyed your poem,,always,..p.d.
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Date: 12/8/2011 11:45:00 PM
Sweet and cute!Congrats Iolanda on your win.
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Date: 12/8/2011 11:30:00 PM
Iolanda, I seem to remember something you told me about your son and if i am remembering correctly, it makes sense why you used cloud as the word. Congratulations in this contest Glad I got to finally see this haiku.
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Date: 12/8/2011 4:22:00 PM
Ahhh! How sweet! Congrats on your win, Iolanda. Kim
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Date: 12/8/2011 1:21:00 PM
I am quite partial to brown eyes, sporting lightly caramel colored peepers myself! What a lucky baby to have you, who writes so sweetly for him! Congrats! ~ECMc
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Date: 12/8/2011 1:13:00 PM
Aww shucks, and what an adorable cloud he must be :) Really sweet, Iolanda and I am smiling :)-- Super congrats on your win! :)
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Date: 12/8/2011 12:31:00 PM
I knew she'd love this one as do I! A big congrats. to you :)!
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Date: 12/8/2011 12:20:00 PM
Iolanda congrats on your win..David
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Date: 12/8/2011 11:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Cyndi's "Creativity" contest Iolanda. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/5/2011 10:53:00 AM
Keep it in your heart.Lovely !! OXOX Anne-Lise
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Date: 12/2/2011 10:40:00 PM
very lovely,, Ioland... good luck in the contest.. with your modern haiku...p.d.
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Date: 12/2/2011 5:05:00 PM
So beautiful Iolanda :) Cyndi will truly love this one-I'm sure of it!!! Thanks so much for watching my clip-It was awesome. They have 3 months from airdate (Nov. 2) to get me the car. No rush...I'd love if it was after the first of Jan...get to pay taxes next year then. We did get our $ though so that was nice. They film right in LA now...you should head up there-it's fun and everyone is so nice!!!
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Date: 11/30/2011 10:32:00 AM
The first glimpse of new life and love at first sight. Sweet poem. love phyl
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Date: 11/29/2011 10:31:00 PM
Your first glimpse....SWEET!!!Love it iolanda~God bless. You'll have to check mine out for this contest!!!//Have a blessed eve. ^Rick
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