Love At First Sight

I first fell in love with you,
When I laid my eyes upon you,
And every morning that I wake,
I fall more in love with you,
Yes, I may hate the person you have became,
But I love you,
Yes, I love you,
And even though you say “Don’t wait.”
But I’m still waiting,
And even though my name is no longer on your heart,
Yours will forever be tattooed on mine,
I’ve realize the mistakes I made,
And I beg for your forgiveness,
Swearing I’d never mess up again,
If only you’d have me,
I first fell in love with you, 
When I laid my eyes upon you,
Baby, I love you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
July 16, 2009 at 1:45 PM
Dreamy love poem Amanda>>James
Adeite Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 8:42 AM
You know Amanda, I think TRUE love is wicked, it makes you love those who don’t care, It makes you help those who hurt you and you put smiles on the face of the person that makes you cry. I could not sleep throughout the night because the girl I loved so much does not even think about me and she does not hide it This piece is awesome… keep your passionate pen walking and working on your poetry pad. Great you!
Higgins Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 8:39 AM
This is the type of love all crave...the voice in the poem is really putting their heart on the line..not holding back..good write.
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