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Love At First Sight

notation of your beauty seen fixation on your smile so clean flirtation by your eyes of green sensation of your touch so keen pulsation of our hearts careen vibrations felt within obscene formation of our lives convene duration of a love serene
November 11, 2018

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Date: 11/28/2018 10:38:00 AM
Hello John, I remember in my teenage years I felt love at first sight. I like this poem. have a nice day my friend.
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/28/2018 3:09:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene, I appreciate it. We all remember first loves. John
Date: 11/11/2018 6:01:00 PM
Awe, and it sounds like you are in love. :) There is an amazing sensation, when a connection is made- instantly. You have expressed with so beautifully my friend. ~ Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/11/2018 9:46:00 PM
Thank you, Brandy, your thoughts are appreciated. All the best. John
Date: 11/11/2018 1:18:00 PM
Excellent rhyming. Well done John :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/11/2018 1:23:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi, I appreciate your comments. John

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