John Gondolf Poet Rhyme

Love At First Sight

notation of your beauty seen
fixation on your smile so clean
flirtation by your eyes of green
sensation of your touch so keen
pulsation of our hearts careen
vibrations felt within obscene
formation of our lives convene
duration of a love serene



November 11, 2018

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Darlene De Beaulieu November 28, 2018 at 10:38 AM Hello John, I remember in my teenage years I felt love at first sight. I like this poem. have a nice day my friend. John Gondolf November 28, 2018 at 3:09 PM Thank you, Darlene, I appreciate it. We all remember first loves. John

Brandy Nicole November 11, 2018 at 6:01 PM Awe, and it sounds like you are in love. :) There is an amazing sensation, when a connection is made- instantly. You have expressed with so beautifully my friend. ~ Brandy John Gondolf November 11, 2018 at 9:46 PM Thank you, Brandy, your thoughts are appreciated. All the best. John

Heidi Sands November 11, 2018 at 1:18 PM Excellent rhyming. Well done John :) John Gondolf November 11, 2018 at 1:23 PM Thank you, Heidi, I appreciate your comments. John