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Love and Your Captain

The shell of my heart has been shattered like glass! So many pieces scattered about I feel so alone I wanna shout Still the loneliness remains, it won’t pass My love was like platinum, not like brass But just when I think this love is real, I doubt This love has me punch drunk, like a twelve round bout And so I drown my pain inside a wine glass I’m a fighter. I’ve been through the emotional strain Love can bring the strongest man to his knees But love can also create the strongest man I’m a fighter. I’ve been through the emotional pain And I’m trying to love a woman with such expertise So take my hand and in this love I’ll be your captain! *Written for “A Rambling Poet’s “Italian Sonnet” Contest (My first “Italian Sonnet” ; )

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/27/2010 8:55:00 AM
Wow, I love this Jimmy.. Best wishes for the contest as well - rgds WN
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Date: 6/25/2010 5:37:00 AM
I am enjoying reading the diverse poetry presented here today. I wish you a weekend of good health, love, and inspiration. The best to you always in your endeavors Jimmy. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/24/2010 9:28:00 AM
We are learning so much about your strength of character and your passion in your poetry, Jimmy. This is a beautifully composed Italian Sonnet! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/24/2010 9:25:00 AM
What a beauty Jimmy,I wrote a poem 'Who is the poet?'a dedication!to poets who wrote verses for me,you are amongst them too,and thankyou!Celene!
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