Love and Trust

It
is
not we
who are the foolish
laying our hearts open to love
When sorrow is our portion and our heart has a hole
our great folly lies in allowing a perfidious fool to taint our trusting soul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 11:34 AM
This is so precised and direct! It couldn't have been said better.... Indeed so excellent. Thanks for the share and never close the heart to trust again, if not, you are more in danger..... Great piece Kimberly
Shaw Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 12:49 PM
Hello Funom! It is a pleasure to hear from you, and thank you so much for your most kind compliments! Hugs, Kimberly
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March 15, 2015 at 3:24 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Shaw Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 7:05 PM
Hi Sara! I certainly enjoyed reading yours as well. Thank you for the encouragement, it is very appreciated. Hugs, Kimberly
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March 15, 2015 at 2:18 PM
.... sorry ..... Now comes: 7 !!!!!
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March 15, 2015 at 2:17 PM
- I've just posted my first Fibonacci :) - I love this one Kimberly, even though it is a bit sad .... always sad when our hearts get hurt - a 7 !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Shaw Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 7:03 PM
Hi Anne-Lise! Thank you so much for your kind comments and the *7*. Have a lovely evening! Hugs, Kimberly xx
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March 15, 2015 at 10:02 AM
Your words have been lived many a time Kimberly. It's learning from such situations. Blessed Sunday to you, hugs//James :)
Shaw Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 10:33 AM
Yes, many lessons to refine us lay along the road to purity. Thank you for the kind remarks, and sending blessings back to you, James! Hugs, Kimberly
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