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First lession in Diamante poetry,

Love and Pain

---------------Love
          passionate, tender
     kissing, holding, embracing,
loneliness, heartbreak, despair, grief,
    crying, Hurting, aching,
          agony, separation
                    pain
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George Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 9:31 PM
Strong emotions beautifully portrayed. Your maiden attempt is a huge success.
Narain Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 9:41 AM
Thanks Valsa.
Andresen Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 10:11 AM
- Yes, love can be painful ... most of us have experienced it ... well written in your diamante, Jay -
Narain Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 9:42 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 27, 2023 at 6:34 AM
Like my Dad experiences after losing mom after so many years of wedded bliss. Great show of emotions from love to pain.
Narain Avatar
May 27, 2023 at 9:43 AM
I am in the same boat even after 20 years, Thanks for reading.
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