Love and Pain

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First lession in Diamante poetry,

---------------Love passionate, tender kissing, holding, embracing, loneliness, heartbreak, despair, grief, crying, Hurting, aching, agony, separation pain

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Valsa George

Date: 5/28/2023 9:31:00 PM

Strong emotions beautifully portrayed. Your maiden attempt is a huge success.

Jay Narain
Date: 5/30/2023 9:41:00 AM

Thanks Valsa.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/28/2023 10:11:00 AM

- Yes, love can be painful ... most of us have experienced it ... well written in your diamante, Jay -

Jay Narain
Date: 5/30/2023 9:42:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/27/2023 6:34:00 AM

Like my Dad experiences after losing mom after so many years of wedded bliss. Great show of emotions from love to pain.

Jay Narain
Date: 5/27/2023 9:43:00 AM

I am in the same boat even after 20 years, Thanks for reading.