Love and Loss

I can still remember the last time I saw you,
A glimpse I throw before you leave the door.
It was a rainy afternoon,
Wind blew so hard,I asked you not to leave.
But I have no strength to make you stay.
You follow your heart,
You left me in vain.
Everyday, I ask to heaven.
Why do these memories don't fade away.
Why does love comes to an end.
I was left in the corner of our room.
Reminiscing the moments we'd shared.
The first day you knocked on my door.
The first time I let you in.
The time we sipped hot milk together.
The eternal happiness you brought to my soul.
Those have been gone since the day you said goodbye.
I am hopeless,dying to feel your warmth.
I long to feel your kiss on my cheek.
When you lick me and send me to bliss.
You knew you're the only one I have on earth.
I am here now,standing in the  rain.
Still hoping to see you once again....
For once, to tell you how much I love you.
That this life is not complete without you.
I want you back,my precious one.
I miss you,Coochie...my little Siberian.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/5/2014 5:02:00 PM
aww you write so true to yourself, I am enjoying reading your words they are honest and pure :) it is going to be a pleasure getting to know you :)
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/6/2014 8:57:00 AM
Oh Casarah.. thank you for leaving my poem a great reward!!! .. :O)) stay sweet and kind to all of us!! and welcome to my circle of souperfriends!!!! ^__^
Date: 1/25/2014 9:20:00 AM
Such a wonderful and touching write , AiyaH .........Oh ! So coochie is a dog ! So sweet :)) Love , Saanvi ;p
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/28/2014 11:45:00 AM
ha ha..yeah Saanvi..coochie is a character dog :)) in my own world!! *__*
Date: 1/21/2014 12:17:00 PM
So touching of a dedication to him kudos my friend. I could feel your pain in this poem. Hugs your friend Michael
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/28/2014 11:45:00 AM
Mike..thank you for always dropping by and for leaving sweet comments!!! .: -)
Date: 1/21/2014 8:04:00 AM
- Is "Coochie" a dog, Aiyah? ?? - A loving poem, beautifully written. - Have a great day - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/21/2014 8:18:00 AM
that's a very cute name.. :)) i love the smell of their mouth..i love puppies!!!! ...i told my husband that i fall in love with him b'cos his breath is smells like puppy..!!! ..:))
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2014 8:18:00 AM
Sometimes it pops up: ? ? ? ? ?
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/21/2014 8:14:00 AM
- I was "mom" ??to a little puppy yesterday. She is smaller than my shoe .... 8 weeks old .... cried a lot in the night .... missed their siblings and her mom - very playful and give kisses all the time - Therefore she got the name, "Kissy" ... // Anne-Lise :))))
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/21/2014 8:09:00 AM
yeah,Anne... It's a dog..:)) thanks..you liked it!! *__*have a great day, too!! :))
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