Love and Hate
Once upon a shiny star,
Hate discovered love’s beauty
Though it was from afar,
He knew it was his duty
But blind young love could not see
Old hate for what he was
He did take it all with glee
Help for love there never was
Out of this hell then began,
What we know as modern man!
-written in 1989 with syllable count updated, possibly my first, some lost in time -
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