Ollie Copley Poet Dramatic Verse

Love and Deception

Lies n deception go hand and hand,
i acually believed your lies of your a changed man.
I would have giving or done anything for you,
but that wasnt something you felt you had to lose.
You feed me so many lies;so much of a disgise,
but now believe im much to wise.
I no longer see the man that you use to be,
because there is no longer a you and me.
You threw it all away,
for I no longer believe anything you say.
You had my heart but chose not care,
for now our love I can no longer bare.
I loved you with everything I had,
thats why this has my so damn mad.
You told me promises and we had so many dreams,
but ovisily that wasn't enough for you so it seems.

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akira artly October 1, 2026 at 5:47 AM I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist,and I’d love to discuss the possibility of bringing this poem to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@: akiraa_artly

Skat A May 6, 2016 at 9:35 AM HI OLLIE....SKAT

Poet Destroyer A April 24, 2016 at 9:01 AM ollie copley, nice to read this one again. linda

Skat A April 4, 2015 at 7:56 PM Ollie, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A March 31, 2015 at 7:21 PM Ollie, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Victoria Anderson-Throop March 30, 2015 at 3:05 AM You show a feeling that all readers can identify with. Nice set up--we want more, though...It would be nice to add a second verse giving more description of what happened. You leave your readers curious. Thanks for sharing this with us! Victoria