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That  great feeling for you,
Seemed strange to hold'
Heart gripped with love'
Love that hurts like death'
Though death induces sorrow'
Your love gave me grief'
Grief so hard to fade'
Grief so hard to bear'
Love torn my heart away'
Torn away in shreds'
And still you careless'
Caressed by your second match'
Is death upon me?
Do you really care
Yes I cared for you
And that care to die refusing'
May who still know
The graves in my heart..
You the first to visit?
The first to be buried....
Long forgotten not,
Call my name and will listen'
Funny when you are gone,
The heart loves you more,
Is love and death related?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 11/18/2013 12:09:00 PM
pia hii ni noma. Morale buda! hehehehe...
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Date: 10/27/2013 10:01:00 AM
John, ... Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. It was nice seeing it on the Poetry Soup HOME PAGE. Always a poetry soup friend <3 = LINDA
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john ngugi
Date: 10/28/2013 1:21:00 PM
Thanks Linda my friend, I accept you and also like your artwork wish to interact, John
Date: 10/27/2013 1:39:00 AM
John, CONGRATULATIONS ;) on having your poem featured................... LOVE SKAT
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john ngugi
Date: 10/27/2013 6:50:00 AM
Thanks skat, I am happy to hear from you. I hope you get to contact me on wish. I like it when I hear from you.
Date: 10/21/2013 7:26:00 PM
This is a sad write but very emotional thank again for sharing your work. Very cool. Thanks also for your comments and welcome again to the soupers.
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Date: 10/21/2013 2:46:00 AM
kudos brother..i would wish we raise kenyan poetry as a family..nice work
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Kennedy Muitherero
Date: 11/18/2013 12:08:00 PM
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Date: 10/17/2013 7:55:00 PM
Hello John Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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john ngugi
Date: 10/18/2013 1:54:00 AM
Hello Skate Thank you for your warm welcome to soup.I am gland to have this opportune moment to share my creativity here.I am a Kenyan aged 23 years and I like poetry with all my heart...I have lacked a platform to share my creativity but now am gland to meet soup family.
Date: 10/17/2013 4:13:00 AM
John, I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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john ngugi
Date: 10/18/2013 2:02:00 AM
Hello, Thank you for a warm welcome. I will be happy to join your contest. I am going to contribute to poetry with all my heart. The thing is I came to know my talent when I was too young back in primary school,writing and acting is all I have though I lack a platform to enable me exploit my talents. Anyway thanks in advance...hope to hear from you soon.
Date: 10/17/2013 3:45:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, John ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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john ngugi
Date: 10/18/2013 2:06:00 AM
Hello, Thank you for your warm welcome, I am gland to to meet a family of creativity.Thanks in advance, hope to hear from you soon.