Love and Baggage

You had me blown out, baggage and baffled
Our love was on the ropes
Blockages of darkness crawling, festering

To trust in you as much
As a clown painted black
A dirge without delivery

In shame and ruthlessness
I determined to press nerves
Or venture without substance

But when the storm and wreckage passed
I still hear your voice crystallized
The shining gem of your impetuousness

Slowly you pull me back
And offer your greatest hope
As excitement turns the page
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May 13, 2016 at 9:46 PM
Kind of romantic, Justin, Fantastic wording, glad to read your poem tonight. Forever ~LINDA~
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