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Love - An Explosive Rant

she was all like - there's something i have to tell you but before she gets to say it his ex wife shows up he's all like - she's going to be staying with me she says - for the weekend he says - for the summer as he walks away you see regret all over her face you know if he knew you know he'd give his eye teeth that's the way they tell stories life however is not a scripted story it doesn't work like that people in love one's the fridge the other's the magnet you can't avoid that kind of attraction your lips are locked before your mind even kicks in love is like that you don't walk around it it is an a to b and it is direct you don't walk through one door just as she walks out another you can be in a huge city somehow you both walk in to the same restaurant somehow you're both alone less than a second later you are glued to one another super glued to one another there is no where no where else you want to be you are stuck together like a tongue on a frozen metal post no matter how painful it is you are exactly where you want to be you don't ah and hum around it you shout it from the rooftops you use a bullhorn you are anything but shy about it you know what love is love is EVERYTHING no one i mean no one dances around love love owns you when they write stories they feed their audience the same crap they’re used to me? i'll play some games you know 'suspension of disbelief' but love you have to serve me a five star meal you don't settle for less when love when your EVERYTHING is the topic
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Williams Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 10:21 PM
Thank you Armand, that is so true and beautifully written - Emotions know no perimeters and your reading gave it depth and brought it alive. As Paul said below - you are born for the stage. Thanks for sharing...Maria
Carmack Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 12:09 AM
Armand, your voice really deepens this poem, like what music does to lyrics.
Austin Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 11:18 AM
Yes. This connects - giving one the helpless feeling that love produces. Such a talent for improvisation you have. Love, daver
Callus Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 2:22 PM
Absolutely beautiful, Armand! Love as experienced when it hits with full force...when cupid hits a bull's eye with three consecutive arrows! As for reading...you were born to live on stage, my friend:) Regards // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 6:58 PM
I really enjoyed giving this one another read. This is a piece to be proud of.
Muideen Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 11:54 AM
I dropped by to reread this piece of yours. It is a pleasure read..............A.M.
Richards Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 11:28 AM
Your voice makes this poem come alive! You make it real...wow, this is how it should be read,..... ! A great piece, and you have read it to perfection! Well done, Armand !!
Dietrich Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 7:13 PM
wow, Armand. I loved hearing your voice on that one. It was even more dramatic than that other one you read for us. A fave for this stand out tribute to REAL love!!!
Onclaud Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 2:07 PM
an explosion of the senses, armand... you simply delight.. huggs
B. Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 1:41 PM
Doesn't get any better than this :) You're write is a flawless gem. Perfect!! A fav.
Muideen Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 12:38 PM
Lol! I enjoy reading your poem. Brilliant write.........A.M.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 8:03 AM
I really enjoyed the poem and the reading Amand. Tremendous job!
Y. Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 7:45 AM
WoW! This is such a well written piece Armand. It captures everything about being and falling in love. This piece is epic and your covered the whole gamut of LOVE. Your writing and skill is outstanding.A gigantic seven and a fav:-)Alexis
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 2:11 AM
Every word rings true Armand! What a fantastic fabulous piece this is! It speaks to every single soul who's ever been in love. I loved hearing the emotion in your voice which made your words a kaleidoscope of colors affecting the senses. This is awesome and a fave for me!It is exactly how my husband and I feel for each other still after 35 years come December 4 th. Bravo! 7 ; )
Smith Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 10:05 PM
Yes...now what restaurant was that?...a fav
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