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Love Again a Collaboration With Maurice Yvonne

devotion unveiled
the fisherman casts his line
his heart now possessed 

curves carved in pleasure
chiseled spine traced by touch
love stripped to the bone

flaws etched precisely
he frees an internal scream
she opens her heart

her essence absorbed
two souls artistic beauty
a match written in stone

Copyright © Carol B. | Year Posted 2017

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Paul Callus Date: 9/8/2021 9:26:00 AM An excellent collaboration between you Carol & Armand. Romantic and more. ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/21/2018 3:08:00 PM thanks for telling me about Armand. I must see if I read his last poem. I try to always keep current of his work since he is one of the best here!! now let me find a new poem of yours I may not have seen yet. Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 1/19/2018 1:40:00 PM Belated comment, love these wonderful Haikus' Login to Reply Carol B. Date: 2/2/2018 9:50:00 PM Thanks :)

Becca Teagan Date: 1/13/2018 9:36:00 PM You two work very well together. These are very good "modern love haiku" ! well done. Login to Reply Carol B. Date: 2/2/2018 9:49:00 PM Thanks :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/11/2018 9:02:00 AM I enjoyed reading these again Carol. Login to Reply Carol B. Date: 1/13/2018 12:27:00 PM Thanks:)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/9/2018 11:23:00 PM Carol B. This is beautiful and perfect. Armand, is my favorite poet... i love the romantic feeling, ... luv Linda Login to Reply Carol B. Date: 1/13/2018 12:28:00 PM Thanks :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/1/2018 2:52:00 PM This is perfect. What a great collaboration. I hope you had an amazing New Years Eve. All the best for the coming year. Thanks for your visit and greeting. Login to Reply Carol B. Date: 1/13/2018 12:34:00 PM Thank you! Wishing you all the best in the new year as well. I haven’t had a chance to read and post much the past couple of months. Hoping to catch up with my reading very soon. :)

Heidi Sands Date: 11/27/2017 12:25:00 PM Wow this is beautiful. Congratulations to the both of you ! :) Login to Reply

John Fleming Date: 10/30/2017 10:04:00 AM Enjoyed immensely! You chose a "good man " to write with, Carol...he is pure gold! My very warmest regards to you both. :) john Login to Reply Carol B. Date: 10/30/2017 11:04:00 AM John, Thanks and yes I agree about Maurice.

Eileen Manassian Date: 10/29/2017 10:20:00 AM Lovely you two...leaves the reader wanting to know more...what good poetry should do. :) Login to Reply Carol B. Date: 10/30/2017 11:04:00 AM Thanks so much!

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 10/27/2017 12:54:00 PM Sparkling gems of Haiku engraved by beauty ! Congratulations dear Carol and dear Yvonne ! Login to Reply Carol B. Date: 10/27/2017 3:29:00 PM Thanks:)

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 10/26/2017 3:02:00 AM Excellent and beautiful collaboration. Lovely haikus. Login to Reply Carol B. Date: 10/27/2017 3:29:00 PM Thanks :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/25/2017 7:50:00 PM This is so gorgeous, Carol. You chose one of the best here to collaborate with. Login to Reply Carol B. Date: 10/27/2017 9:25:00 PM Thanks :)

Arthur Vaso Date: 10/23/2017 4:37:00 PM Such a wonderful poem, great collab you two!! Login to Reply Carol B. Date: 10/25/2017 7:47:00 PM Thanks :)

Tim Smith Date: 10/23/2017 10:09:00 AM You two did some marvelous work...I love the theme of love...Brava Login to Reply Carol B. Date: 10/25/2017 7:47:00 PM Thanks :)

Silent One Date: 10/23/2017 8:57:00 AM This is beautiful, all haiku are lovely.. Login to Reply Carol B. Date: 10/25/2017 11:18:00 PM Thanks :)

Jan Allison Date: 10/23/2017 8:02:00 AM a most beautiful collaboration - I would call the form contemporary haiku:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Carol B. Date: 10/25/2017 11:18:00 PM Thanks :)