Carol B. Poet Haiku

Love Again a Collaboration With Maurice Yvonne

devotion unveiled
the fisherman casts his line
his heart now possessed 

curves carved in pleasure
chiseled spine traced by touch
love stripped to the bone

flaws etched precisely
he frees an internal scream
she opens her heart

her essence absorbed
two souls artistic beauty
a match written in stone

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Paul Callus September 8, 2021 at 9:26 AM An excellent collaboration between you Carol & Armand. Romantic and more. ~ Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich March 21, 2018 at 3:08 PM thanks for telling me about Armand. I must see if I read his last poem. I try to always keep current of his work since he is one of the best here!! now let me find a new poem of yours I may not have seen yet.

Harry Horsman January 19, 2018 at 1:40 PM Belated comment, love these wonderful Haikus' Carol B. February 2, 2018 at 9:50 PM Thanks :)

Becca Teagan January 13, 2018 at 9:36 PM You two work very well together. These are very good "modern love haiku" ! well done. Carol B. February 2, 2018 at 9:49 PM Thanks :)

Richard Lamoureux January 11, 2018 at 9:02 AM I enjoyed reading these again Carol. Carol B. January 13, 2018 at 12:27 PM Thanks:)

Poet Destroyer A January 9, 2018 at 11:23 PM Carol B. This is beautiful and perfect. Armand, is my favorite poet... i love the romantic feeling, ... luv Linda Carol B. January 13, 2018 at 12:28 PM Thanks :)

Richard Lamoureux January 1, 2018 at 2:52 PM This is perfect. What a great collaboration. I hope you had an amazing New Years Eve. All the best for the coming year. Thanks for your visit and greeting. Carol B. January 13, 2018 at 12:34 PM Thank you! Wishing you all the best in the new year as well. I haven’t had a chance to read and post much the past couple of months. Hoping to catch up with my reading very soon. :)

Heidi Sands November 27, 2017 at 12:25 PM Wow this is beautiful. Congratulations to the both of you ! :)

John Fleming October 30, 2017 at 10:04 AM Enjoyed immensely! You chose a "good man " to write with, Carol...he is pure gold! My very warmest regards to you both. :) john Carol B. October 30, 2017 at 11:04 AM John, Thanks and yes I agree about Maurice.

Eileen Manassian October 29, 2017 at 10:20 AM Lovely you two...leaves the reader wanting to know more...what good poetry should do. :) Carol B. October 30, 2017 at 11:04 AM Thanks so much!

Demetrios Trifiatis October 27, 2017 at 12:54 PM Sparkling gems of Haiku engraved by beauty ! Congratulations dear Carol and dear Yvonne ! Carol B. October 27, 2017 at 3:29 PM Thanks:)

Ravi Sathasivam October 26, 2017 at 3:02 AM Excellent and beautiful collaboration. Lovely haikus. Carol B. October 27, 2017 at 3:29 PM Thanks :)

Andrea Dietrich October 25, 2017 at 7:50 PM This is so gorgeous, Carol. You chose one of the best here to collaborate with. Carol B. October 27, 2017 at 9:25 PM Thanks :)

Arthur Vaso October 23, 2017 at 4:37 PM Such a wonderful poem, great collab you two!! Carol B. October 25, 2017 at 7:47 PM Thanks :)

Tim Smith October 23, 2017 at 10:09 AM You two did some marvelous work...I love the theme of love...Brava Carol B. October 25, 2017 at 7:47 PM Thanks :)

Silent One October 23, 2017 at 8:57 AM This is beautiful, all haiku are lovely.. Carol B. October 25, 2017 at 11:18 PM Thanks :)

Jan Allison October 23, 2017 at 8:02 AM a most beautiful collaboration - I would call the form contemporary haiku:-) hugs jan xx Carol B. October 25, 2017 at 11:18 PM Thanks :)