Love Affair

I begged
I pleaded
And did I beg again
But at fault I was
Still I remained

But did I beg again
What was first sight of love
The consequences thereof
A night full of all
Much joy and jolly

Did I love and laugh
To me all you seemed
So much of my future
So much heartless of a puppet
Why sulk like a baby

But did I love again
Now all lies in balance
So much of love affair
That started by ending
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 21, 2015 at 5:30 PM
VICTOR:) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you to comment my comment. ((Regarding the reply you left in my comment box)) Always ~LINDA~
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September 30, 2014 at 5:18 PM
Enjoyed this your introductory poem on Soup, Victor. Love affairs can put one in a tricky situation....perhaps it's best when it ends before starting! // paul
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September 30, 2014 at 11:00 PM
Lol, very true hey Paul. Thank you.
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September 8, 2014 at 5:51 PM
Victor, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Satekge Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 4:46 AM
Thanks a lot Linda, I am willing to learn more and be groomed.
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September 8, 2014 at 6:26 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Victor - I choose your first great written free verse - You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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September 11, 2014 at 4:49 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise, I feel more at home. I will definitely participate.
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