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Love Affair

I begged I pleaded And did I beg again But at fault I was Still I remained But did I beg again What was first sight of love The consequences thereof A night full of all Much joy and jolly Did I love and laugh To me all you seemed So much of my future So much heartless of a puppet Why sulk like a baby But did I love again Now all lies in balance So much of love affair That started by ending

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/21/2015 5:30:00 PM

VICTOR:) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you to comment my comment. ((Regarding the reply you left in my comment box)) Always ~LINDA~

Paul Callus

Date: 9/30/2014 5:18:00 PM

Enjoyed this your introductory poem on Soup, Victor. Love affairs can put one in a tricky situation....perhaps it's best when it ends before starting! // paul

Victor Satekge
Date: 9/30/2014 11:00:00 PM

Lol, very true hey Paul. Thank you.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/8/2014 5:51:00 PM

Victor, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Victor Satekge
Date: 9/11/2014 4:46:00 AM

Thanks a lot Linda, I am willing to learn more and be groomed.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/8/2014 6:26:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Victor - I choose your first great written free verse - You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Satekge
Date: 9/11/2014 4:49:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise, I feel more at home. I will definitely participate.