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Love Affair

With rainbow wings, you tarry among the stones
Your caress as light as dew drops in the sun
Searching for a rose to call your own...
A morning breeze intrudes to join the fun
Tickling vines, and petals, where you've clung 

You find a place to rest awhile and preen
Then fly to me, assured and debonair 
You spread apart kaleidoscopic wings
While proudly knowing roses cannot compare
Nor can the scarlet ribbon in my hair

Dear butterfly, while neighbors won't suspect
This love affair I have with you, 
My hair, in which you light, holds new barrette
You flatter me,... am I prize pursued?
You've fluttered down, to be my arm's tattoo

The butterfly flutters by, in whimsical routine
I see him circle round my head, as if to play a game
A tease you are, dear butterfly, I cannot intervene
We will be friends, or more than that, tho' it may be insane
I'll tell you mine, you tell me yours, or do you have a name?


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For PD. Butterfly Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A. Sharma Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 1:26 AM
Congrats on ur awesome poem n win Carrie! Lovely pic!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 9:22 AM
I love the picture and poem. Congratulations Carrie.
Hamilton Avatar
August 18, 2015 at 1:22 PM
a perfect picture Carrie congrats on win hugs 7
Rodgers Avatar
August 18, 2015 at 8:48 AM
A wonderful flight of fancy, congrats on your win.
A  Avatar
August 18, 2015 at 12:18 AM
Carrie, thank you very much for the entry. Congratulations on your butterfly win. SKAT love
A   Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 6:02 PM
Carrie. Congratulations on your XOOL flirting poetic win. Love LINDA"
Carter Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 8:21 AM
Love this love affair! Congrats Carrie!
Hlabisa Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 2:09 AM
Lovely: 'Searching for a rose to call your own' - Congrats and al the best in the next contest
Wigley Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 8:56 PM
Lovely piece of embroidery, Carrie a fave. Congratulations, Viv x
A  Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 2:36 PM
CARRIE, congratulations on your flirtatious win. SKAT LOVE
Allison Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 2:25 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx
Nance Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 1:58 PM
Beautifully done! :)
A   Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 8:30 PM
Carrie, Congratulations, in Kelly's Butterfly Fluttering By.. Sweet move... LINDA
Gibson Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 2:25 PM
Carrie, I love, love, love this. You have such a special gift of stringing words together like pearls on a silver chain. Congratulations on a well deserved win.
Sietesantos Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 7:47 AM
Congratulations on a beautiful win!
Merrill Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 2:39 AM
Nicely done Carrie. A good poem and a well-deserved win...xxx...:)
Mehta Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 1:08 AM
Congrats on a fine win, carrie
A. Sharma Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 10:24 PM
Lovely Carrie,,, great thot,, i too am falling in love wid this lil tender flutter ! congrats on big win !
Deschler Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 8:32 PM
I love the elegance and whimsy of this write, Carrie. I really enjoyed your description of the butterfly as it was circling around you! Congratulations on your win!
Nance Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 6:25 PM
Wonderful!! A winner for sure! I loved the beauty of it, the awe of it. Great job. :)
Allison Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 3:49 PM
simply stunning! good luck in the contest - hugs Jan xxxx
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