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With rainbow wings, you tarry among the stones Your caress as light as dew drops in the sun Searching for a rose to call your own... A morning breeze intrudes to join the fun Tickling vines, and petals, where you've clung You find a place to rest awhile and preen Then fly to me, assured and debonair You spread apart kaleidoscopic wings While proudly knowing roses cannot compare Nor can the scarlet ribbon in my hair Dear butterfly, while neighbors won't suspect This love affair I have with you, My hair, in which you light, holds new barrette You flatter me,... am I prize pursued? You've fluttered down, to be my arm's tattoo The butterfly flutters by, in whimsical routine I see him circle round my head, as if to play a game A tease you are, dear butterfly, I cannot intervene We will be friends, or more than that, tho' it may be insane I'll tell you mine, you tell me yours, or do you have a name? _____________________________________________ For PD. Butterfly Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/20/2015 1:26:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome poem n win Carrie! Lovely pic!
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Date: 8/19/2015 9:22:00 AM
I love the picture and poem. Congratulations Carrie.
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Date: 8/18/2015 1:22:00 PM
a perfect picture Carrie congrats on win hugs 7
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Date: 8/18/2015 8:48:00 AM
A wonderful flight of fancy, congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/18/2015 12:18:00 AM
Carrie, thank you very much for the entry. Congratulations on your butterfly win. SKAT love
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Date: 7/24/2015 6:02:00 PM
Carrie. Congratulations on your XOOL flirting poetic win. Love LINDA"
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Date: 7/21/2015 8:21:00 AM
Love this love affair! Congrats Carrie!
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Date: 7/21/2015 2:09:00 AM
Lovely: 'Searching for a rose to call your own' - Congrats and al the best in the next contest
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Date: 7/20/2015 8:56:00 PM
Lovely piece of embroidery, Carrie a fave. Congratulations, Viv x
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Date: 7/20/2015 2:36:00 PM
CARRIE, congratulations on your flirtatious win. SKAT LOVE
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Date: 7/20/2015 2:25:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/20/2015 1:58:00 PM
Beautifully done! :)
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Date: 6/8/2014 8:30:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations, in Kelly's Butterfly Fluttering By.. Sweet move... LINDA
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Date: 6/4/2014 2:25:00 PM
Carrie, I love, love, love this. You have such a special gift of stringing words together like pearls on a silver chain. Congratulations on a well deserved win.
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Date: 6/4/2014 7:47:00 AM
Congratulations on a beautiful win!
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Date: 6/4/2014 2:39:00 AM
Nicely done Carrie. A good poem and a well-deserved win...xxx...:)
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Date: 6/4/2014 1:08:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win, carrie
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Date: 6/3/2014 10:24:00 PM
Lovely Carrie,,, great thot,, i too am falling in love wid this lil tender flutter ! congrats on big win !
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Date: 6/3/2014 8:32:00 PM
I love the elegance and whimsy of this write, Carrie. I really enjoyed your description of the butterfly as it was circling around you! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/27/2014 6:25:00 PM
Wonderful!! A winner for sure! I loved the beauty of it, the awe of it. Great job. :)
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Date: 5/27/2014 3:49:00 PM
simply stunning! good luck in the contest - hugs Jan xxxx
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