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Love Acts of Music

The cello and I we sustain in each other while we play the melody The violin caresses my shoulder while we execute the work musical, the double bass squeezes my chest when together we are in ensemble ... With the tambourine, my fingers and my hands do frenetic juggles... the drums helps me to beat up my evils ... and to frighten my fears... The harmonica consciously kiss me, kiss while we are on stage... But it's the fender guitar that plays me inside in solo riffs that inflates my soul and makes me squirm on wishes ... evaporating my suffering, all while we fly high feeling alive in music !

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Date: 5/22/2019 6:46:00 PM
Passing from string quartet to a Fender. Well done
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Date: 5/23/2019 3:09:00 AM
Thank you Allen music is one the greatest creation that God gave to men... Salute alkas
Date: 5/22/2019 4:33:00 PM
Holy shit Alkas. I was all taken in by this being a poem of an old string quartet and then thunders the Fender!!! Excellent. My minor was music at university, but the reader needs not know this to enjoy your poetic musicality Alkas. Simply melodic...
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Date: 5/23/2019 3:15:00 AM
I already knew that you would be the first to comment on this poem You told me that you wrote a Blue for a group ... I knew that you were a fan of music and that you understood the subject. I am grateful for enthusiastic praise! salute Jeff ! alkas

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