Love a Pie Day

Steak pies is my favourite  to eat with vegetables for dinner
With succulent pastry which couldn't be thinner

Meat and gravy are cooked in unison
Making this pie a lip smacking tasty one

Dessert what more could I ask for, I love
a Bramley Apple pie cooked with a clove

The flavour is one to die for, 
With lovely creamy custard, over it pour

Now it's nearly supper time what pie takes the lead
Nothing more than a Cornish pasty its a nearly pie indeed

Inside some  tiny cubes of potatoes and swede mixed with onion and meat
Looks longingly at the clock, is it time yet for this treat

Goes to bed repleted, full of pasty and such
Dreams of pies and pasties, would think i've had enough.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/9/2014 10:21:00 AM
yummy write, congrats on the win
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/10/2014 6:11:00 PM
yummy pies indeed, making me feel hungry.....Seren
Date: 12/8/2014 2:33:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/10/2014 6:11:00 PM
Thank you Jan....Seren
Date: 12/8/2014 1:09:00 PM
Some I have not heard of, sounds yummy. Congrats.
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Date: 12/8/2014 12:09:00 PM
Seren, lovely dreams and pie poem. Thanks for entering the pie contest, truly wonderful submissions sent in.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/10/2014 6:12:00 PM
Hello Sheri....Many thanks to you........Seren
Date: 10/16/2014 7:34:00 PM
Call me crass but to me all pies are lovely. I love pie!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/10/2014 6:13:00 PM
not all Maurice......Seren
Date: 10/9/2014 12:52:00 PM
I really liked it but I think if you added another seventeen pies it would have been better. Just Kidding! It is perfect as is.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/16/2014 6:36:00 PM
lol as long as the pastry is well made a pie is lovely ....Seren
Date: 10/9/2014 6:20:00 AM
You had me at pie :)....what time is dinner?..... Hugs Tim
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/16/2014 6:36:00 PM
will post u some ....lol Seren
Date: 10/9/2014 4:34:00 AM
mmmm you have made my mouth water Seren! good luck in the contest. Hugs jan xxx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/16/2014 6:35:00 PM
thanks Jan mine too Seren
Date: 10/9/2014 3:33:00 AM
Excellent poem! I like it Seren. The dinner sounds very delicious;) after this read, mine and all the one I read 'round I'll be daydreaming of pies and such for the rest of this week. Lol...Good luck in this contest my friend! And thank you for visiting my page. Love, peace and light! xxxx D.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/16/2014 6:35:00 PM
lol Dorian They were my favourite ...Seren
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