Love a Pie Day

Steak pies is my favourite  to eat with vegetables for dinner
With succulent pastry which couldn't be thinner

Meat and gravy are cooked in unison
Making this pie a lip smacking tasty one

Dessert what more could I ask for, I love
a Bramley Apple pie cooked with a clove

The flavour is one to die for, 
With lovely creamy custard, over it pour

Now it's nearly supper time what pie takes the lead
Nothing more than a Cornish pasty its a nearly pie indeed

Inside some  tiny cubes of potatoes and swede mixed with onion and meat
Looks longingly at the clock, is it time yet for this treat

Goes to bed repleted, full of pasty and such
Dreams of pies and pasties, would think i've had enough.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mehta Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 10:21 AM
yummy write, congrats on the win
Roberts Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 6:11 PM
yummy pies indeed, making me feel hungry.....Seren
Allison Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 2:33 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
Roberts Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 6:11 PM
Thank you Jan....Seren
Lamoureux Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 1:09 PM
Some I have not heard of, sounds yummy. Congrats.
Harper Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 12:09 PM
Seren, lovely dreams and pie poem. Thanks for entering the pie contest, truly wonderful submissions sent in.
Roberts Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 6:12 PM
Hello Sheri....Many thanks to you........Seren
Yvonne Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 7:34 PM
Call me crass but to me all pies are lovely. I love pie!
Roberts Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 6:13 PM
not all Maurice......Seren
Yvonne Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 12:52 PM
I really liked it but I think if you added another seventeen pies it would have been better. Just Kidding! It is perfect as is.
Roberts Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 6:36 PM
lol as long as the pastry is well made a pie is lovely ....Seren
Smith Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 6:20 AM
You had me at pie :)....what time is dinner?..... Hugs Tim
Roberts Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 6:36 PM
will post u some ....lol Seren
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 4:34 AM
mmmm you have made my mouth water Seren! good luck in the contest. Hugs jan xxx
Roberts Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 6:35 PM
thanks Jan mine too Seren
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 3:33 AM
Excellent poem! I like it Seren. The dinner sounds very delicious;) after this read, mine and all the one I read 'round I'll be daydreaming of pies and such for the rest of this week. Lol...Good luck in this contest my friend! And thank you for visiting my page. Love, peace and light! xxxx D.
Roberts Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 6:35 PM
lol Dorian They were my favourite ...Seren
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