Love 9

Caught on the unever grounds of submission
With a never ending option of segression
Talking about the differences of evil and good
Walking among man learning as I should

Memories of ancient Egypt and it's wood
Vibrent obcarities at the mention of your name
Violent observations and from with they came
Fighting over rotted ruins and pegs for a game

Carring over obsecurities of a famous dame
Locked into eternitiy left on what remains
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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St.Cross Avatar
October 15, 2012 at 12:55 PM
* I Really Love This Depthful Intriguing Reflection I Might Say, Amazing Sweet Beautiful Ruth Courtney. Muy Magnifico. Mi Amore, Rachel *
Courtney Avatar
October 15, 2012 at 8:41 PM
many thank yous Rachel your compliments are going to swell my head.
Bordner Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 5:58 PM
I like the detached sentiment from "walking among man as I should..." - as if you are describing an ancient conflict - evokes thoughts of Isis - thank you my oracle - J.A.B. %
Courtney Avatar
September 11, 2012 at 11:34 PM
it's about loves journey across generations, God's blessings of the love and memories held over actions and taken to God
Ink-U-Script Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 7:35 AM
Very very interesting piece here...smiles..enjoyed!!!
Courtney Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 10:35 PM
I like interesting
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