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The Sun I was at verge of death,you put your soul into mine and made me alive I was in dark,feeling low You made me shine brighter.. brighter than the Sun Cherishable were those unspoken nights spent at the shore I could see you running towards me to hug me to make me feel secure ..On those New moon days I love you!Honey You Hugged me cried out your heart and said " The night sky is full of stars,all gleaming to their fullest trying to light the sky like the Sun but even with millions of stars shining bright,they will never light the sky with beautiful,glorious radiance of the Sun nor can they warm the heart as the Sun does day after day People may tell you,You are a Star but for you..I believe that's not enough,Because to me You are the Sun " Where did you go? Please come back to me!! Woke up from this dreadful dream and yelled my heart " I wish you were near to me when you went away from me,For the world you may be a person but For me you mean the whole world "

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Date: 9/26/2017 8:13:00 AM
Excellent first post... Welcome to poetry soup..
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Vennela Dharmakari
Date: 9/26/2017 10:59:00 AM
Thank you so much! Silent One Thanks for your encouragement!!