Love

Walking through the twisting dark 
Holding on to nothing but my beating. Heart  
Walking alone in that somewhat peaceful  
Dark road of the ole railroad 
Wishing i would hear it chuggling down the tracks
I would take my sad lonesome self a free ride 
To were ever it stops . Sad dreams lonesome self haven't ever did anything for my self . Face to face with my soul is nothing but light so 
I took that Chance I won't ever glance bck I already know how my journey  will turn out . May the Angels sing peaceful harmony above and beyond this Carnation I found my wings o. Gona spread them wide I'm not gonna think  twice look above the sky you will see me already sorrowing as I go through the clouds around the moon always know I'm a angel of God we will see each other soon. Love pray be yourself earn your wings can't you see how peacefully the sky can be . Stay grounded we will compare our wings hopefully Angels in the sky please watch over a lot of creatures down below I pray we all have faith and love inside our mind and soul it feels good to be free flying in that awsoem mysterious godly sky .  No one will ever figure it out that's what makes it beautiful .till the end of time my allusion or adventure sue was worth every penny an dime .

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Date: 7/27/2017 2:36:00 AM
Your writings are really good, their s no doubt about it, but God has made us Humans, so he ll raise us like humans, the angels will always remain angels and the humans will always remain humans, still it s writtwn really nice, but you can t consider it as a poem, if you want to write poems, then read other peoples and see how they write it, this is more of a short story,
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Date: 2/1/2017 4:10:00 AM
Your writing skills are improving, keep it up, Ashley!
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Ashley Rainwater
Date: 5/26/2017 10:06:00 PM
god bless thnk u
Date: 1/1/2017 1:42:00 PM
excellent pen ashley very beautifully painted wishing you a blessing of beautiful year ahead
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Ashley Rainwater
Date: 5/26/2017 10:06:00 PM
thank you god bless
Date: 12/28/2016 6:25:00 AM
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Date: 12/21/2016 1:03:00 PM
Simply beautiful Ashley
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Date: 12/20/2016 6:09:00 PM
So tell me what y'all think?
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