Love

Missing you Even when you’re next to me Wishing the very best Smiling Because you are smiling Longing for you when you’re not there Not wanting anything but your presence Not ever wanting to part….

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/6/2018 10:35:00 PM

Beautiful, Alona. Congrats on your winning poem.

Alona Perlin
Date: 3/7/2018 1:05:00 PM

Thank you very much!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/27/2018 1:58:00 AM

You have captured the essence of love with this succinct poem that shares the depth of passion. Beautiful Alona! Congratulations on your win! : )

Alona Perlin
Date: 2/27/2018 10:06:00 AM

Thank you very much!

Lu Loo

Date: 2/26/2018 5:48:00 AM

so much said in such few words sweet Alona, you also have a beautiful name! thank you and congrats : )-luloo

Alona Perlin
Date: 2/27/2018 10:06:00 AM

Thank you very much!

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 11/29/2016 10:10:00 AM

Congratulation. Love means also to carry it everywhere. That kind of love is explained in Corinthians 13...Elias Canetti added the attempt to describe a good person, while Max Frisch explains how to be polite. Stefan Zweig, also... Thus, there is a world entire in your poem.

Alona Perlin
Date: 2/27/2018 10:07:00 AM

Right, true. I'm glad you see it in my poem. Thank you.