Love

Missing you
Even when you’re next to me
Wishing the very best
Smiling
Because you are smiling
Longing for you when you’re not there
Not wanting anything but your presence
Not ever wanting to part….
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gauthier Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 10:35 PM
Beautiful, Alona. Congrats on your winning poem.
Perlin Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 1:05 PM
Thank you very much!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 1:58 AM
You have captured the essence of love with this succinct poem that shares the depth of passion. Beautiful Alona! Congratulations on your win! : )
Perlin Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 10:06 AM
Thank you very much!
Scars Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 5:48 AM
so much said in such few words sweet Alona, you also have a beautiful name! thank you and congrats : )-luloo
Perlin Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 10:06 AM
Thank you very much!
Bocsa Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 10:10 AM
Congratulation. Love means also to carry it everywhere. That kind of love is explained in Corinthians 13...Elias Canetti added the attempt to describe a good person, while Max Frisch explains how to be polite. Stefan Zweig, also... Thus, there is a world entire in your poem.
Perlin Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 10:07 AM
Right, true. I'm glad you see it in my poem. Thank you.
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