Love

Looking through love's lens, I see beauty in your imperfections.

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A one line contest - Love
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    8th October 2016

beautylovemonoku

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Eileen Manassian

October 27, 2016 at 9:00 PM

Oh....if all were as you are, dear. What a wonderful world that would be. LOVED this write. Hugs

Paul Callus

October 28, 2016 at 1:25 PM

Hi Eileen, to be honest I don't go looking for imperfections, I'd rather look at the picture as a whole! Thank you ... I love your comments:) Hugs // paul

Hija De La Luna

October 13, 2016 at 11:25 PM

It's the most beautiful love! This is s true, Paul!

Paul Callus

October 14, 2016 at 7:42 AM

We do tend to look for perfection, Maria, but love can be blind! Thank you for loving this love:) Regards // paul

Eve Roper

October 12, 2016 at 3:45 PM

This is wonderful verse, if you truly care and love one never sees the imperfections on the other person as I have seen in my own family ... congratulations on your win.... :) Hugs Eve

Paul Callus

October 13, 2016 at 11:00 AM

Thank you for the lovely feedback, Eve. Always pleased to have you visiting:) Hugs // paul

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

October 11, 2016 at 12:36 PM

Surely you do. Love.

Paul Callus

October 11, 2016 at 1:45 PM

Hello Rajat! It is great to have you visiting; hope you're keeping well and active. ~ All the best // paul

Anisha Dutta

October 10, 2016 at 1:18 PM

Congrats Paul. You must see beauty in her perfection also.

Paul Callus

October 10, 2016 at 2:41 PM

Hi Anisha! Thank you for stopping by. If we can see beauty in imperfections, then we surely cannot fail to see beauty in perfection:) Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

October 9, 2016 at 8:52 PM

Yes, you knew the song!! Congrats on the win

Paul Callus

October 10, 2016 at 7:47 AM

Thank you, Andrea:) Enjoy the week ahead:) Regards // paul

Joseph May

October 9, 2016 at 7:14 PM

You describe it very well Paul...Congrats on your win

Paul Callus

October 10, 2016 at 7:49 AM

Many thanks to you, Joseph. Regards // paul

Alexis Y.

October 9, 2016 at 1:17 PM

Hi Paul, I knew you would be on the winners list. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Paul Callus

October 9, 2016 at 1:53 PM

Thank you for coming back with congrats, Alexis. Pleased to see you on the winners' list, too:) Regards // paul

Probir Gupta

October 9, 2016 at 6:21 AM

Nice gift of love ... beautifully said ... a charming flash ...

Paul Callus

October 9, 2016 at 12:55 PM

I love your delightful comments, Probir...thank you! Regards // paul

Nette Onclaud

October 9, 2016 at 4:39 AM

wow, so nice to read you again, paul.... this is a treasure from the heart!..huggs

Nette Onclaud

October 10, 2016 at 4:34 PM

i understand, paul... my sweet cheers on your sparkling win.. huggs

Paul Callus

October 9, 2016 at 12:54 PM

Thank you lots, Nette:) Wish I could be on Soup more often, but other priorities are taking up most of my time! Hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

October 8, 2016 at 7:04 PM

Awesome, it reminds me of a pop song from last year. Wish I could think of the name of it. OH yes, ALL OF ME> That's it!

Paul Callus

October 9, 2016 at 6:01 AM

Hi Andrea, I looked up the song you mentioned...I like these 2 lines: "Love your curves and all your edges // All your perfect imperfections". Thanks for liking:) Regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu

October 8, 2016 at 6:55 PM

I agree with Alexis you penned this one.It looks like a winner. Good Luck!!!!

Paul Callus

October 9, 2016 at 6:14 AM

Thank you, Darlene. I believe that we all have our flaws, but love goes beyond the top layers! Regards // paul

Alexis Y.

October 8, 2016 at 4:52 PM

Hi Paul, You penned a good one liner. I agree "love" sees pass ones imperfections. This reads like a winner to me. I wish you the best in the contest. :-) Alexis

Paul Callus

October 9, 2016 at 6:11 AM

Thank you Alexis for liking and having faith in this one-liner:) Regards // paul

Charmaine Chircop

October 8, 2016 at 4:49 PM

Our imperfections help us judge less....How wonderful when we find those who are able to see beyond.them..Love your post Paul.

Paul Callus

October 9, 2016 at 6:07 AM

Thank you, Charm. I wrote and posted this one-liner last year, but deleted it after I found out that online there are many references to 'beauty & imperfection'. I did not want anyone to think that I had copied it!! I posted it again this time ... coincidence does not amount to copying! Regards // paul

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