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Love

Longing to go with you Off to a fairyland Valentine I wish to become Every moment of my life

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/9/2014 10:07:00 AM

Nicely penned acrostic, Mohan, congrats on the win

Mohan Chutani
Date: 10/12/2014 5:37:00 AM

Thanx Dr Ram.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/9/2014 8:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Mohan.

Mohan Chutani
Date: 10/12/2014 5:37:00 AM

Thanx Brenda

Rohini Perumal

Date: 10/9/2014 2:59:00 AM

terse and sweet

Mohan Chutani
Date: 10/12/2014 5:38:00 AM

Thanx Rohini.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/8/2014 4:17:00 PM

That would be something to strive for..an everlasting valentine. Congrats, Love it. BG

Mohan Chutani
Date: 10/12/2014 5:39:00 AM

Thanx BG for your appreciation. Mohan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2014 4:07:00 PM

Mohan, Yours is awesome because it is so short and sweet, I think if you had said, "I wish YOU to become ....it would have fit better with the last part: every moment of MY life.

Mohan Chutani
Date: 10/12/2014 5:41:00 AM

Andrea, thanx for appreciating. Your suggestion is well taken.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/8/2014 11:10:00 AM

short, sweet, romantic - many congrats:-) hugs jan xxx

Mohan Chutani
Date: 10/12/2014 5:42:00 AM

Jan, thanx.

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/5/2014 7:46:00 AM

Innocent and sweet, nice valentine:)

Mohan Chutani
Date: 10/12/2014 5:42:00 AM

Thanx Casarah.