Love

Longing to go with you
Off to a fairyland
Valentine I wish to become
Every moment of my life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mehta Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 10:07 AM
Nicely penned acrostic, Mohan, congrats on the win
Chutani Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 5:37 AM
Thanx Dr Ram.
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 8:41 AM
Congratulations on your win Mohan.
Chutani Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 5:37 AM
Thanx Brenda
Perumal Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 2:59 AM
terse and sweet
Chutani Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 5:38 AM
Thanx Rohini.
Gorelick Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 4:17 PM
That would be something to strive for..an everlasting valentine. Congrats, Love it. BG
Chutani Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 5:39 AM
Thanx BG for your appreciation. Mohan
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 4:07 PM
Mohan, Yours is awesome because it is so short and sweet, I think if you had said, "I wish YOU to become ....it would have fit better with the last part: every moment of MY life.
Chutani Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 5:41 AM
Andrea, thanx for appreciating. Your suggestion is well taken.
Allison Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 11:10 AM
short, sweet, romantic - many congrats:-) hugs jan xxx
Chutani Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 5:42 AM
Jan, thanx.
Nance Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 7:46 AM
Innocent and sweet, nice valentine:)
Chutani Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 5:42 AM
Thanx Casarah.
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