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In desperation they claw too impatient to wait for one above all others Recklessly tearing apart a whole for crumbs Tasting aimlessly at any other Thoughtless for the one before their own salvaging leftovers post tug of war only taking while staking a claim for self not the other Minds eye will always wander Unhappy while happy just like every other Luck will let loose those untrue Until that day comes left stuck in the mud they are but like others Take care and thought for the one that trumps all Or choose mediocre and end up failing and flailing floundering love not love faking it like all the others

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/15/2014 2:44:00 PM
Very good poem Becc or I should say excellent. Enjoyed it much. I seen your comment on the Poet Destroyers site and wanted to welcome you also. But I was very surprised at just how good it was. Best wishes and take care!
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Date: 5/19/2014 8:52:00 PM
Hi Vincent! Thank you for the kind words! I am new to sharing my writings and I truly appreciate the comment and read! ~ Becc

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