Love

a kiss seals his fate
oxytocin through the roof...
prisoner of love  

Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich
Contest: Nothing But Love

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Carrie Richards

Date: 1/25/2014 9:59:00 AM

So clever.......a unique twist on the contest, Sara!! Congrats!!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/25/2014 8:16:00 AM

You gave me a big smile with this one. congrats . still smiling. BG

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/25/2014 7:54:00 AM

- Sara - Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem in: Nothing But Love Contest - Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/24/2014 8:11:00 PM

Congratulations on the fine win in the contest, Nothing But Love, sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2014 7:58:00 PM

aha!! this is you, Sara!!! I felt a guy had written this one. Big congratulations. It is a clever one.

Roger Horsch

Date: 1/24/2014 7:54:00 PM

Congratulations Sara, It always feels good to have a win. A wonderful poem...Hugs...Roger

Jack Horne

Date: 1/16/2014 3:54:00 PM

this has got to be a big winner, Sara

Jancarl Campi

Date: 1/15/2014 10:23:00 PM

wow what a kiss can do. thanks for reading my work.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/15/2014 8:12:00 PM

my, love how the happy hormome,oxytocin fires this 'ku on love...pleasantly scribed, sara.. huggs

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/15/2014 8:11:00 PM

Super images, very deep and meaningful, I had to look to the dictionary for oxytocin, brilliant, sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/15/2014 5:34:00 PM

Wow, this is a fabulous write my friend! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this immaculate poem here this evening! This write tells a lot within its few lines and does so very powerfully Sara! What a masterful piece, Great Work!!

Love

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