Love

Is that what you and i shared when we stared across each other across the classroom Is that what set my heart racing when you walked past me in the stairs Is that what made the blood course through my veins and made me blush when you smiled Is that what makes me stammer when you asked me anything Is it love which makes me envious when you walk away with that cute looking girl Maybe its love that holds me back from telling you that i love you Maybe its the theory of love which keeps me from telling because love is sometimes best left unsaid but still felt by each cell in my body...

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Cherie Thomas

Date: 7/7/2013 4:49:00 PM

Hi shreyas,,, I really enjoyed your lovely, poem. I think john made a great comment,, I noticed the whole biological chemical experience felt with the feeling of love. You captured that great,,,,which isnt often said in alot of poems. I love the end the theory of love!! And I believe we use it to guard our hearts from getting hurt, so in some things are best left, unsaid....thanks so much for visiting my poem. A song of love, really appreciate it:) cheriexx

John Ginesi

Date: 7/2/2013 7:59:00 AM

Hi Shreyas, I completely agree with your poem, what you said was word perfect, you must have felt what you wrote here, this is really good poetry, something that is missing from a lot of other poems that I have read before, you have great talent and I feel your destiny is writing poems or even romantic novels, all the best. John

Shreyas Susan
Date: 7/7/2013 12:29:00 PM

thanks a lot John,I read your poem magnet and loved it especially the theme the point about it being able to both attract and repel