Love

I was very angry with him
But then love spoke to me_forgive
Hurt but then heard from Elohim
Don't daily hurtful words relive

lifeloverhyme

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Samantha Townsend

December 27, 2012 at 8:33 AM

love is confusing isn't it.

Poet Destroyer A

December 12, 2012 at 10:27 PM

Love Love...Sara. love always speaks loud to me... wish it would not... a good form... always~pd

Len Gasun

December 12, 2012 at 8:56 PM

This is superbly beautiful and great Kyrielle my dear friend, Sara. I love it and I love the form. I hope I can try also this form when I've enough time. I like so much how you describe the greatest word, Love. Love is really powerful in our heart. Looking forward for the continuation. Thank you so much for sharing and your very inspiring comments on my latest poem. Have a grace-filled time/day always! love and big hugs, Leonora

Jack Horne

December 12, 2012 at 3:12 PM

I love it so far, my friend - and words of wisdom indeed

Carl Fraser

December 11, 2012 at 8:01 PM

Harmful words taken to heart can be curses to the soul, God said the power of life and death lie in the tongue and we will be judged on every word that comes out of our mouthes, something to think about as i read this great verse Sara, blessings, Carl